April 12, 2011
By elliottch BRONZE, Superior, Montana
elliottch BRONZE, Superior, Montana
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Catherine Bennet and Tyler West had it all planned out. Tyler would graduate first, move to a city, and when Catherine graduated she would follow and they would live together. It was not much different than most young lovers aspire to do while living in a small community.
After a new mayor in the small town of Noderton is elected, however, things begin to make changes for the worse. New moving laws forbidding the abandonment of the town are put into place and there are horrible consequences for trying to escape.
With Tyler already in New York, Catherine must find a way to get to him and get out of the town which is made especially difficult after the mayor takes a special interest in her.

Chanel E.


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on May. 6 2011 at 2:30 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I really liked how the dialogue and thoughts were realistic, as others have commented. The chapters were a bit short, but overall written well and I like the idea. I would have liked a little more time to get to know the characters better though. What I saw was very interesting, and I think this story has real potential. Keep writing :)

A_Evans said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 10:14 pm
I have a hard time giving my characters qualities others can relate to so I was just wondering.

andria parks said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 10:11 pm
andria parks, Spokane, Washington
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I liked her individuality and spirit. And I know how she feels like whne she wants to be with Tyler and can't :(

A_Evans said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 10:00 pm
What characteristics did you relate to with Catherine?

Marshmellow said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 9:50 pm
Very well written...loved the beginning and ending. and agree that the characters were very realistic

on Apr. 22 2011 at 9:44 pm
Wow this was a very good read!! I hope to see more works like was very original

A_Evans said...
on Apr. 21 2011 at 3:35 pm
I liked how you set up the beginning. it really hooked me :)

andria parks said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 10:02 am
andria parks, Spokane, Washington
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Very interesting. I loved Tyler and related to Catherine well. Good characters!

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