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I finally found it! :)
Well, I do really like this, and you have an excellent writing style, but there were kind of a lot of typos, mostly in the first chapter. They were mostly little things, though, because I can't even remember them off the top of my head, and I'm a grammar freak! ^_^ You're a great writer, and I really hope you don't ever stop!
And i will.
Where is your story???
I can't find it
I really liked this! :) I think your writing style is great, and your imagery is really good.
I'm not sure if I would consider it a novel, though, probably more a short story. You should also check your punctuation regarding the dialogue. I'm not sure what the relevance of the second chapter was, but it fit in nicely, anyway.
Keep writing! (Well, I don't mean continuing this, considering that ending was very final.)
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Thank you so much!!!! That feels great, especially because one of my friends didn't like it much. :(
Well thanks, and i tried to find your story but i could seem to find it.
And yes, it is actually a short story, but short story wasn't an option to file it under.
Just a random question:
What did you like about it???