My Prince Charming

December 2, 2010
By xoxoAL3XUSxoxo BRONZE, celeste, Texas
xoxoAL3XUSxoxo BRONZE, Celeste, Texas
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover." "You got enemies? good, that means you stood up for something"-Eminem. "The purpose of life is a life of purpose" - Robert Byrne "Love conquers all" - Virgil


Summary:

Lexi was all about her job, that she didnt even think about finding love. then one day, she met Ralph. It was a perfect fairy tale romance. till she saw his true colors. but it was too late, she had already fallen for him.


Alexus M.

My Prince Charming


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on Jan. 31 2012 at 11:59 pm
live.love.learn. SILVER, El Cajon, California
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Favorite Quote:
The supreme prayer of my heart is not to be learned, rich, famous, powerful, or good, but simply to be radiant. I desire to radiate health, cheerfulness, calm courage, and good will. I wish to live without hate, whim, jealousy, envy, fear. I wish to be simple, honest, frank, natural, clean in mind and clean in body, unaffected - as ready to say I do not know, if it be so, and to meet all men on an absolute equality - to face any obstacle and meet every difficulty unabashed and unafraid.
I wish others to live their lives, too - up to their highest, fullest, and best. To that end I pray that I may never meddle, interfere, dictate, give advice that is not wanted, or assist when my services are not needed. If I can help people, I'll do it by giving them a chance to help themselves; and if I can uplift or inspire, let it be by example, inference, and suggestion, rather than by injunction and dictation. That is to say, I desire to be radiant - to radiate life.
-Elbert Hubbard

i absolutely loved the ending! it makes you want to come back and read more! Keep writing I would love to read more!

on Jan. 4 2012 at 10:43 am
ReniseCasseus BRONZE, Toronto, Other
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maybe he was possessed? or someone was in his head

on Jul. 17 2011 at 6:20 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

LOVED!!! It! Great job! (sorry for advertizing,) anyone if you could check out my stories called the beast and nightstalker that would be great!. Also, if u could post comments if  liked it or not that would be great! I love helpful critszum and feedback! Thanks! and keep writing! :)(:

sheashea said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 12:51 pm

wow thats all i can say  

did he a mental thing going on????


on Jun. 17 2011 at 3:07 pm
AbbyOliver6 BRONZE, New York, New York
1 article 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every cloud has a silver lining" and "I don't get distracted easil-SQUIRREL!"

write a book 2!

on May. 12 2011 at 7:48 pm
veggiearthlover BRONZE, Portland, Maine
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Happy are those who dream dreams and are ready to pay the price to make them come true."

I really liked it, but I would have liked it more if the grammar was better!

bayleem GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2011 at 4:17 pm
bayleem GOLD, Yarmouth, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Best Friends are like bras: close to your heart and there for support.”

I like it but grammatically its wrong... Also if he is an assistant he can't be making too much $... Fancy dinners wouldn't equate...

on Feb. 9 2011 at 9:34 am
Parantan BRONZE, Mars, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Giving up doesn't always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go.

I really like it, though I'm curious about why he did that. Was it some kind of mental disorder? Something he went through in his childhood? I really enjoyed it but all through the story I was hoping at the end it would say why he did what he did...

Thanks anyway for an amazing story!


RoseOzera said...
on Jan. 22 2011 at 1:48 pm

this is a very powerful piece! it has a few grammatical, and puncuation errors, but other than that it was amazing, i am very sorry that you had to put up with this pretend prince charming. i havn't even been in anny relationships yet, but i can't even begin to imagine what an abusive relationshi must have felt like. im so so sooooo sorry. thank you for sharing your story with the world, and with me.

 

if you wouldn't mind, i would love for you to read my romance novel out here, it's titled 'One Quiet Whisper', and give me some insight on it. thank you.


Leann14 GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2010 at 9:19 am
Leann14 GOLD, DeGraff, Ohio
16 articles 4 photos 112 comments
well i mean sure some people may like the ending but im sorry i would have to agree with PrincessSparkle... it just wasn't that satisfying. it didn't really make sense either. in my opinion.

on Dec. 17 2010 at 2:25 pm
CameronG. BRONZE, Warsaw, Indiana
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your Options
1)Love me
2)Leave me alone

I liked it u should write a second one

on Dec. 17 2010 at 9:54 am
dark_roses14 PLATINUM, Mazon, Illinois
20 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
play the music, turn it up loud, dance around, and drown out reality

um, idk if it was purposeful or not, but in the 2nd page, you have her name as Lisa, then Lexi. idk if anyone else caught that. sorry, im an english freak sometimes

on Dec. 16 2010 at 12:19 pm
xoxoAL3XUSxoxo BRONZE, Celeste, Texas
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover." "You got enemies? good, that means you stood up for something"-Eminem. "The purpose of life is a life of purpose" - Robert Byrne "Love conquers all" - Virgil

haha thanks. im working on it so it will be up before you know it!

on Dec. 15 2010 at 3:34 pm
lillyrosesunset, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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WOW! I loved it!! Thanks so much! BTW I loved ending! What a twist! (:

on Dec. 15 2010 at 7:25 am
ok love this. whens the next book??? i so want to read it. i mean i finished this in like 30 minutes and was so sad it ended. I want more!!!! :)

on Dec. 14 2010 at 12:44 pm
Angie_101 BRONZE, Minneapolis Mnn, Minnesota
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yea,thats a good idea...i will be waiting 4 iiiit!!!

on Dec. 14 2010 at 10:53 am
xoxoAL3XUSxoxo BRONZE, Celeste, Texas
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover." "You got enemies? good, that means you stood up for something"-Eminem. "The purpose of life is a life of purpose" - Robert Byrne "Love conquers all" - Virgil

yeah thats a good idea. thanks! ill get right on it!

on Dec. 13 2010 at 11:43 am
Angie_101 BRONZE, Minneapolis Mnn, Minnesota
2 articles 2 photos 23 comments
Yeah you should write the second book,n it would really make the story really good if  Palph comes back n some how he tells her why he does wht he do whn he gets mad.and oh i think you should put that some how the new guy love the girl(i dont remember her name),n the girl like the new guy.

on Dec. 13 2010 at 11:14 am
xoxoAL3XUSxoxo BRONZE, Celeste, Texas
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover." "You got enemies? good, that means you stood up for something"-Eminem. "The purpose of life is a life of purpose" - Robert Byrne "Love conquers all" - Virgil

thank you angie. umm.. i was thinking about writing a second book telling about the next man she bumps into and maybe even having Ralph, the first man, come back to her one day and then she has to figure out what to do.. what do you think?

on Dec. 11 2010 at 5:09 pm
Angie_101 BRONZE, Minneapolis Mnn, Minnesota
2 articles 2 photos 23 comments
i really i want to kno what happen when she accisently bumped nto a new man..n i reaaly like your story:)


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