From a Cocoon to a Butterfly

May 11, 2014
By sasunaru BRONZE, Rancho Cucamonga, California
sasunaru BRONZE, Rancho Cucamonga, California
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Summary:

Being gay is a troubled thing in our society, and for many kids it's hard for them to come out to their parents. Some rather hide that fact and continue on with there life, but that's not how it's going to happen with David.


Naomy E.

From a Cocoon to a Butterfly


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on Sep. 9 2016 at 5:47 pm
Willflower.-.-. BRONZE, Yuma, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
This is us. This is who we are. We demand attention.

Interesting subject. I agree with the other comment, but grammatical errors are hindering me from really delving into the story. Imagine the scenery, smells, the feels, the sights, the sounds. That's is just one key of an amazing story. 3.5/5

on Sep. 19 2014 at 11:29 am
AutumnMoon BRONZE, Lebanon, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"We see our better selves in the eyes of those who love us." -Cassandra Clare

I liked the subject of this book a lot. I think it's important for people to realize that being gay is okay and you did a good job of arguing that. One thing that I found you may need to fix is the pace of this novel. I know you wanted to have a short story, but at some parts it seemed kind of rushed. Beides that, I like it a lot. 4/5




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