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From a Cocoon to a Butterfly

Naomy E.
From a Cocoon to a Butterfly
Summary: Being gay is a troubled thing in our society, and for many kids it's hard for them to come out to their parents. Some rather hide that fact and continue on with there life, but that's not how it's going to happen with David.

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Willflower.-.-.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sep. 9 at 5:47 pm
Interesting subject. I agree with the other comment, but grammatical errors are hindering me from really delving into the story. Imagine the scenery, smells, the feels, the sights, the sounds. That's is just one key of an amazing story. 3.5/5
AutumnMoon said...
Sept. 19, 2014 at 11:29 am
I liked the subject of this book a lot. I think it's important for people to realize that being gay is okay and you did a good job of arguing that. One thing that I found you may need to fix is the pace of this novel. I know you wanted to have a short story, but at some parts it seemed kind of rushed. Beides that, I like it a lot. 4/5

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