A Moment of Suspense: Siblings

March 28, 2011
By KaonKiroko BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
KaonKiroko BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
2 articles 1 photo 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your thoughts become your words.
Your words become your actions.
Your actions become your habit.
Your habit becomes your character.
Your character becomes your destiny."


Summary:

In Bakersfield, California there's a small house on Dracena Street; our house. And in our house, it seems as if no one could give a damn about what's been going in here. All the neighbors hear the screaming, but they all just turn out the lights.

By now, everyone's fed up with everything, fed up with us. So now, we don't have anyone to turn to but our mother. But one night, Mom never came home... and he did.

Tags: Family


Irene C.

A Moment of Suspense: Siblings


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on Apr. 2 2011 at 8:51 am
KaonKiroko BRONZE, Bakersfield, California
2 articles 1 photo 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your thoughts become your words.
Your words become your actions.
Your actions become your habit.
Your habit becomes your character.
Your character becomes your destiny."

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on other arcs of the story, so the next one I write will be from Cecilia's point of view, only it shows what happened to their real dad, Tom.

on Apr. 1 2011 at 1:47 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Boy your story was really good and I hope you keep on writing more soon. Good Luck!! :)




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