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2036 - The Apocalypse

Samantha F.
2036 - The Apocalypse

THis piece is not yet finished, but will be if encouraged to write more

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real_saxman said...
Aug. 24, 2014 at 3:07 pm
It's an interesting story. The characters seem genuine and the dialogue is sound. However, I don't know why you had so many spaces in between each paragragh. I don't believe it's gramatically correct, but I'm not sure. I think it's worth looking into. If for some reason skipping multiple lines is acceptable in the world of literature, you should carry that style throughout your writting. I noticed on the third page you went back to fairly normal spacing. The sentence, The... (more »)

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