WOW. This was amazing! Lots of good descriptions and details, the characters came to life and I felt like I was there with them.
Yay! First to comment( yeah I'm that immature to still say that)
I really enjoy the way you describe things, it's just perfect. I don't know why people haven't commented on it or rated it, it's great. I really enjoy reading this sort of stuff. You are doing a shamzing job, keep writing, please.