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Like A Flower Blooming
Summary: Ari is 14 years old. She's scared of drawing attention to herself and showing people her drawings. As Simulation Day comes, she knows that the main character will be played by her best friend, Ashley, who isn't afraid of anything.
When she enters the simulation, she finds out that she has been chosen to play the lead of the most famous series of all time. To play Harry Potter.
When she enters the simulation, she finds out that she has been chosen to play the lead of the most famous series of all time. To play Harry Potter.
Barnowl14
This is awsome!! Why doesn't every school have something like that? :( This is well-thought out, and writen better than I would have done!
(By the way, is Ari prononced Ottie Or Are-ie? I have a friend who's name is Ari prononced Ottie)
It's pronounced AR-ee like the first part of ARIanna or Ariane. It's one of my favorite names along with Lily.
Cool! New chapters!
I was just going through your book again and noticed something. In chapter twelve, you said there where 7 catchers. They're called chasers and there are three of them. And you didn't mention the Keeper.
I just thought I'd mention that. Other then that, it's awsome.
I'm really sorry. I'm relying on my memory for a lot of this but ive been trying to get stuff in the right order( even though I'm massively failing).
It's not a problem! Once I caught myself writing 'two' everytime I meant to write 'to'
JustAnotherOwlAw, I love this! Why is there not a Simulator that can put me in the Harry Potter world? But seriously, this is so good! Are you going to continue through all the seven years? And I'm confused...Is Ari actually gone from her family for seven years to be in the story? Anyway, this is incredible, such a great idea! Please continue writing :)
No, the seven years will be during one day and I'm thinking about keeping the scar on her head for her as a reminder about her expierences. I'm definetely going to try to get through all seven years though it might take seven years!! I already have ideas for the next few years. The reason I wrote this is because I'm a HUGE HP fan and I've always wanted to be HP. I hope one day they will have a Simulator so that we can do this. It would be so cool!!!
By the way, the next three chapters are up. From Halloween to The Game and Hagrid's Hut( talking about the Stone and Nicolas Flamel)
dancemomspotter12love this please write more it is very good and interesting!!
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