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Little Girl Lost

Little Girl Lost
Summary: She is trying to find out were she belongs and come from.

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Imy_Spray said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 12:07 am
I like the idea of the story. It's really cool and original. But some parts were a little mixed up where you had words switched round and sometimes it would switch from present to past tense. Just something to think about I guess :) But don't get me wrong, its great!
Mermaidmissy replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 9:23 am
Thank You! That really means a lot to me when someone really likes my story. Do you have any thing I can read on some of your stuff? Let me know ok! :)
emmy1578 said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 12:47 am
i agree! very good outline and plot, just a little more work on the dialogue and details! great story thou(:
Mermaidmissy replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 2:49 pm
Thank You so much for reading my story, but I do have a question though, how can I go back and fix the pages? Or add more pages to them? :) 
emmy1578 replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 4:26 pm
Detail. detail is key. and simply by adding in more events and subplots would be a big help too.
Mermaidmissy replied...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 5:05 pm
How can I go back and fix my story, because I don't know how? Can you please help me on that part. :)
Mermaidmissy said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 11:48 am
Thanks I'm so happy you really like it a lot. I will be looking for you stuff to ok. Vote often on my web page. Thank You!! :)
MissDarkCross said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 4:40 pm

I think the story is alright, but I think the dialouge should be made so it can be more believable.

:3 Make sure you have someone check over your work also! It can help with the typos..

Mermaidmissy replied...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 5:06 pm
Do you have anything posted on your stuff at all, I would so love to read them. :)

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