War of the Elements

May 28, 2012
By Knightingale BRONZE, Green Bay, Wisconsin
Knightingale BRONZE, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Summary:

Violent waves crashed against the ship, making it sway back and forth. Thunder boomed through the air while the lightning lit the ocean, revealing the long tentacles of a sea monster as it sinks back to the ocean floor. It seemed like any second the giant ship would be torn apart and the crew along with its captain lost in the ocean forever, never to see their families or love ones again.


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War of the Elements


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on Dec. 8 2016 at 1:33 pm
chris_916 BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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This has very good details and l like what you did in the 2 par when you explain about the violents and when the waves crashed into the ship, this is very good.


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