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A Cursed Romance
Summary:
This is a romance novel filled that is season with action/adventure. It is about how far Gavin will go for the person he loves, and what it will cost him.
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A Cursed Romance
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sorry You can't see the link for my Jess and Gavin "actors". :'(
Just type in Courtney Visser and Nick Russo into Google Image search. It should be the first picture
Thanks for your comment! ;P
To be honest, I just wanted there love to just start with a kiss. In my mind, they never even talked to each other until they met at the bar. So, their love started just at their moment.
I do agree with you I am very rushed when I write stories, but that may be because I watch too many shows with fast plot lines. (I like trying to give people a mental movie.)
The attack, I tried to make it seem like he was going to ra.pe her, but maybe it didn't seem like that.
Also, I plan on making a sequel. I hope to be able to bring Jess back to life or have Gavin and Jess keep their love alive. Anyway, thanks for the comment!
Short and sweet is a great way to describe your story!
However, I think the story itself was rushed a little. You could have expanded the beginning a bit to show how their love grew and how how this started. The attack itself, seemed a little unprovoked and not very rational. Maybe add some reasoning behind it (the attack).
But I love the ending, it adds a new twist. Maybe you could write a sequel about whatever Jess has become.
I loved this story on the whole. I wish it was a little longer, but the characters were really great and really creative.
Great job!
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Favorite Quote:
"You love someone, you open yourself up to suffering, that's the sad truth. Maybe they'll break your heart, maybe you'll break their heart and never be able to look at yourself in the same way. Those are the risks. The thought of losing so much control over personal happiness is unbearable. That's the burden. Like wings, they have weight, we feel that weight on our backs, but they are a burden that lifts us. Burdens which allow us to fly..."
-Dr. Jack Hodgins (Bones)