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The Great Escape

Ben.smith
The Great Escape
Summary: My family is all dead accept for my brother who saves me in the beginning. But I find an old friend and when we go through together things happen. People die.





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Timekeeper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 11:33 am

You have a few grammar issues you need to fix (the difference between except and accept, between you're and your, etc.)

Also, there is a line in the summary I don't get. "...when we go through together things happen." I don't understand what that is supposed to mean.

 

I think as long as you have someone look over your work and edit the little errors like that you will have a fine time writing!

 

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