Captured

August 14, 2012
By Nimra BRONZE, New York, New York
Nimra BRONZE, New York, New York
2 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Summary:

Two twin siblings were separated when they were only 4 years old!Carter McKnight has been living with his mother, a detective, and Emma McKnight has been living with her father, also a detective. When a family friend kidnaps both twins, they will reunite and discover the real reason why there parents separated. Emma and Carter will have to work together in order to survive and make it out alive.


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Nimra Shaikh said...
on Apr. 3 2013 at 3:54 pm
Thank you so much!!! Your stories are as wonderful as well!!! :D So many wonderful writers in the world!!! :D

KateLA GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2013 at 9:47 pm
KateLA GOLD, Everett, Washington
11 articles 20 photos 194 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t you find it Funny that after Monday(M) and Tuesday(T), the rest of the week says WTF?
-Unknown

I loved your story, it just needs a little more description of the character's surroundings, but other than that I really liked the story line, and the message about family you were trying to get across. 5/5!

Nimra BRONZE said...
on Sep. 1 2012 at 5:11 pm
Nimra BRONZE, New York, New York
2 articles 0 photos 25 comments
Thanks so much it means so much

M-star BRONZE said...
on Sep. 1 2012 at 5:22 am
M-star BRONZE, Kalamazoo, Michigan
4 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Won't you come into the garden? I would like my roses to see you."- Richard Brinsley Sheridan

This story is amazing!!:) I kept reading faster and faster with each chapter! I really do love stories that involve siblings!! And the characters of both Carter and Emma are so cool and sweet!

Nimra BRONZE said...
on Aug. 21 2012 at 2:50 pm
Nimra BRONZE, New York, New York
2 articles 0 photos 25 comments
Thanks so much, it means alot!

on Aug. 21 2012 at 2:22 pm
foreverSmall PLATINUM, Brighton, Michigan
23 articles 0 photos 37 comments
Great. Cool plot. A few spelling errors though. It makes me want to read more, awesome job. 

Nimra BRONZE said...
on Aug. 17 2012 at 3:21 pm
Nimra BRONZE, New York, New York
2 articles 0 photos 25 comments
Colol and mysterious book


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