stealthly

December 19, 2009
By SpiceyRedPepper GOLD, League City, Texas
SpiceyRedPepper GOLD, League City, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Im not clumsy im just allergic to gravity!!!!


It crackled, it moved stealthly. A million things raced through my mind. it was there, and i was petrified, quick rasps of breaths escaped from my dry mouth. Sweat was seeping out of my pores! IT was still there moving among the various things on my bedroom floor, I could hear it. My heart was pounding like a million race horses pounding their steady hooves on the hard ground, if it could not hear me moving, it could hear my heart. I was trying to think of other things it could be but, nohting soothing or relaxing come to mind. I knew it was very careful of what it was doing, but i could still hear it. Trying to be still, my bed covers enveloped me in a HUGE heat bubble unable to move to breath. It crackled, It moved stealthly.


The author's comments:
my teacher made us write a horror "paragraph" without pronouns! so this is what i came up with she read it to everyone!

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on Jan. 18 2010 at 6:09 pm
SpiceyRedPepper GOLD, League City, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Im not clumsy im just allergic to gravity!!!!

thank you!!!!!!!!

on Jan. 16 2010 at 5:34 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we're doing it- Neil Gaiman.
Who are you to be who you are?-Le'Na Pernell

huh. interesting.

I liked it tho.

>.<


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