The Vampire Slayer: Intro

January 9, 2011
By StevenKing BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
StevenKing BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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The wind howled, like a werewolf at the moon. It was cold. Mid-November cold.
It was the twntyfifth, and only five more days untilthe slayer would stop hunting us until 2011. The reason was because the slayers may accidentally kill a civillian, since everyone was a blood sucking fiend around the holidays.
My name is Steven. I am a vampire that is part werewolf. I follow Caludar, the oldest, most powerful Vampire around. His brother Nialuc, is the oldest, most powerful werewolf, so they are like me.
I want to tell my story of the war between the Vampires, Werewolves, Demons, and Humans. I should Probably start at the beginning.


The author's comments:
Im writing a book, and i want constructive criticism so that i know what to add to the story, what to take out and stuff like that because we can only udge eachother.

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