June 17, 2010
By steezyb33zy GOLD, Ewa Beach, Hawaii
steezyb33zy GOLD, Ewa Beach, Hawaii
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I have a call to literature, perhaps of a low order -- i.e. humorous. It is nothing to be proud of, but it is my strongest suit.

He is like a firefly in the night, dancing intricate patterns across the silhouettes my mind occasionally and inadvertently weaves out of spite. Making the silk moonlight seem dim, he is a nightlight tearing up my marred perception of reality. Forlorn silences are shattered one by one by the strangled yet eloquent truths he utters — there is a daybreak, a deep rumbling in my heart that makes me tremble slightly, even to this day. Weary with curiosity and a strange yearning, I emerge from the rubble, no longer guarded. The four walls - that fickle castle and throne I’d surrounded myself with - lay in ruins, pointed shards and home to lurking creatures. But now, he is my protection. Oh, how he has abruptly dismembered my wicked world.

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on Jul. 17 2010 at 1:07 pm
mudpuppy BRONZE, Orangeburg, South Carolina
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Life is like a box of cheese and flower petal sometimes it's soft and sweet, sometimes it just plain stinks. - M.J.

Wow. It's like whoever she's talking about pulled at her soft, sensitive side, leaving her afraid and confuse. Of course, I'm just taking a guess at the theme here. :) This is sweet, yet slightly dark. Brilliant.

digimac22 said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 7:36 am
digimac22, Fairfield, Connecticut
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Whatever you are, be a good one.

This is so good! I loved it! Write more! YOur vocabulary and descriptions brought the piece to life. Could you take a look at my work please? Some are short like this piece and I don't know if I should try to start making them longer...?


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