vampires part 1

November 23, 2009
By computer-wise-guy BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
computer-wise-guy BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Max was sitting in his room playing video games when he heard a commotion outside. He catapulted off his couch, and athletically ran outside. There was a car crash. ”Come on” he thought “there is a person under that car” so he sprinted forward and lifted the car and kicked the person out of the way.

Max was no ordinary boy he had super strength. He went inside to listen to his police scanner. There was a commotion on high street. Jessica had gone missing and Megan was also.

When he got there they were both gone. All of a sudden Jessica hurled herself at him and tried to bite him. He ducked and rolled out of the way. “Vampires” he thought. Megan crept up behind him and sank her fangs into his neck. When she removed them there where twin puncture wounds below his jaw line…….look forward to vampires part ii

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