The Cold One

July 15, 2009
By KayleyH BRONZE, England, Other
KayleyH BRONZE, England, Other
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A deep echo surrounded me; it was then a cold icy chill spread down my back.
“I won’t hurt you.” He said giving me an evil smile
“You will.” I said as I backed away from him and into the darkness
He stepped towards me and let out another of his evil smiles.
“Please.” He said looking deeply into my eyes
I trembled between breaths and closed my eyes as he pressed his lips against my neck. He then edged closer
“Wait.” I said
“For what?”
I looked up at the moonlight, the stars shone against the jet-black sky. The tarmac beneath my feet was crumbling.
“I want to do this right”
“What is there to do wrong?” he said bearing his sharp pearly white teeth
“What are you?”
He bared his teeth again “Take a wild guess”
I could feel myself shaking as I whispered this very word.
He whispered back in my ear.
“Of course”
Then pressed his lips against my neck again, his cold marble like lips kissing me slowly.
I closed my eyes

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This article has 3 comments.

KayleyH BRONZE said...
on Aug. 3 2009 at 2:26 pm
KayleyH BRONZE, England, Other
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Fair enough, I don't normally write anything like this... just thought I'd give it a go, please check out my lost in the system story :)

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2009 at 10:16 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Good writing, but too Twilight-esque for my taste, only I have a feeling this vampire isn't as friendly as Edward the marble teddy bear. This is great though. ZERO

on Jul. 31 2009 at 9:02 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

ahhhg!!! WRITE MORE!!! that was absolutely stunning!! i loved it!! write more plz!!

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