Love

January 5, 2009
By Amber Ojak, Hull, ZZ

Love is the strongest word you will ever come across, because when you love someone, the word leads to many more questions.
How long will you be around?
Will you ever love me?
How can you not know how you make me feel?
Love is also like glass. When it breaks it shatters into tiny pieces, which make you feel like each piece is cutting at you. You cannot imagine the pain

The author's comments:
What inspired me to write this piece, is the boy who i love the most. He has broken my heart and fixed it up again, but i just like expressing the feelings in poetry

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lexi<3 GOLD said...
on Nov. 1 2009 at 5:08 pm
lexi<3 GOLD, Spaulding, South Dakota
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i absolutely love this. its just the kind of thing i wanted to read because i just went through about 34 different writings i didn't quite care for. i love the simplicity and there should not be anymoreto this piece. its's meant to be simple and to make the reader think. i think it's perfect the way it is and it definitely makes me think. amazing.

emolovewish said...
on Jan. 14 2009 at 4:42 pm
This is great -- I know exactly what you are talking and feeling. It would be great if you wrote more though!




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