And So Romeo Forgot His Lines

July 28, 2011
By Muziksoul29 PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
Muziksoul29 PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
29 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont ever look to th epast, cause you see things you already know. Look to the future to see things come at you like a fast ball.
-Me:)


"Aria! What is taking you so long?" My best friend yelled from outside my bedroom door. We were getting ready to go to The Casket to see a new band perform.
"I'm almost done. Give me a second to check my eye liner." My friends and I are what you would call Emo, but in truth we're simply people put in the social heiarchy by those who look down on us for our individuality.
"Ok, I'll be out in the car." She finally said. I walked out of my room, closing the black door softly, and ran to catch up with her.
"I'm here.Let's go." She started her little purple BMW bug and we began the five minute drive to our favorite club/hang out.
When we pulled up, the hopped out and went to the frint of the line. Because we were here so often, we got priveleges, not having to wait in line was one of those.
"Hey Aria, you're gonna love the band tonight." Jayce yelled at me from the bar. Jayce was my other best friend. He worked here every weekend just to see the band without having to pay.
"Hello. You must be Aria." I turned to see a very cute guy standing behind me with a drink in his hand.
"And you are?" I asked, a hint of surprise in my voice.
"You're next boyfriend." He smirked. Wow...


The author's comments:
This is just a short prologue to say. It will come into play later. And the Casket is just something i made up...imagine th ecrypt from the vladimir tod series for a look to the place.

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on Nov. 25 2011 at 5:47 pm
Muziksoul29 PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
29 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont ever look to th epast, cause you see things you already know. Look to the future to see things come at you like a fast ball.
-Me:)

if i do continue it, there is a plot that makes the whole thing make sense. 

on Nov. 22 2011 at 8:52 pm
Odessa_Sterling00 DIAMOND, No, Missouri
87 articles 108 photos 968 comments

Favorite Quote:
All gave some, some gave all. -War Veterans headstone.

You should try naming your stories according to whats going on in them.  That's like naming a book "Shark Attack" and the book is really about how to cook a cake.  Makes no sence..

on Nov. 22 2011 at 6:50 pm
Muziksoul29 PLATINUM, Paris, Tennessee
29 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont ever look to th epast, cause you see things you already know. Look to the future to see things come at you like a fast ball.
-Me:)

I'm still not sure myslef, though you should not be rude about it. It is simply a thought for a story that I'm not sure if I will be continuing.

on Nov. 22 2011 at 3:27 pm
Odessa_Sterling00 DIAMOND, No, Missouri
87 articles 108 photos 968 comments

Favorite Quote:
All gave some, some gave all. -War Veterans headstone.

What does the title have to do with anything?

 


Muziksoul29 said...
on Oct. 7 2011 at 11:41 am
Thank you for telling me what you think about it...I have been really busy and I was planning on updating it, but totally forgot.

teenpoet8 said...
on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:32 am
Well I did like this piece and I would love to see a story built around it.  However, I didn't like where it was left off and feel like you should write more...I will certainly read it if you do.


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