His Smile

March 26, 2011
By smilesunshine PLATINUM, Puyallup, Washington
smilesunshine PLATINUM, Puyallup, Washington
34 articles 4 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you're lucky enough to be different from everyone else, don't change to be the same." ~Taylor Swift


He looked at me; I could feel his eyes on me. That wasn’t in a haunting or creepy way though. Our eyes met. The corners of his mouth twisted up into a smile. It wasn’t like one of the smiles that he had when he was up to no good, or when he was show-boating with his friends. No, it was different. It was better. I could tell from that smile all the emotions he felt. Happiness, peaceful, many more, but most of all, love. That smile gave me butterflies in my stomach. I smiled back at him. I tried to make him see how I felt just from my smile; but it wasn’t nearly as genuine as his. I took his had in mine, knowing that this is real. I moved closer, breathing in his scent. Finally, I leaned in and stole his kiss, knowing that wouldn’t be the last time I would do so.


The author's comments:
I wrote this after i finished a test in my geometry class. I love to smile, and I love it when someone returns the smile with one that's truly genuine.

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on Nov. 26 2011 at 8:59 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

Awwwww!!! :):):);)

on Mar. 31 2011 at 1:25 pm
chrisoulakat PLATINUM, Tinley Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Stop waiting and be free. Of me- put me deep inside you and then go out in the world and live. Love the world and yourself in it, move through it offers no resistance, as though the world is your natural element." -The Time Traveler's Wife

You are certainly welcome! I definitely will!

If you don't mind- please look at some of mine. :) Keep writing!


on Mar. 31 2011 at 1:19 pm
smilesunshine PLATINUM, Puyallup, Washington
34 articles 4 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you're lucky enough to be different from everyone else, don't change to be the same." ~Taylor Swift

Thank you so much. I love getting feed back on my work. :) 

Most my stuff is romance related so if you want to, feel free to check it out!!! :) 


on Mar. 30 2011 at 9:37 pm
chrisoulakat PLATINUM, Tinley Park, Illinois
48 articles 10 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stop waiting and be free. Of me- put me deep inside you and then go out in the world and live. Love the world and yourself in it, move through it offers no resistance, as though the world is your natural element." -The Time Traveler's Wife

Cute! I adore this peice! I'm a sucker for love; so I completely fell in love with this!


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