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Everyday I would look into his eyes and then smile and he would do the same i would think to myself "he just made my day" but, I wasn't aware that he would soon be making my life.
people would say im a drama queen because every moment that i couldn't be with him i would be sad or queit, some nights i would tear up, until january 6th he came up to me in the hall on my way to algebra and kissed me on the lips it was beautiful, mostily because it was unexpected. He told me how he felt and i told him the same, and no longer do i cry or have a gloom face because as long as he is around in my life i will be the happiest girl on the planet and one day he states that he will marry me, he just simply made my life<3

Timothy&Maggie





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DiamondsIntheGrass This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 11, 2010 at 2:43 pm

grammar check, please.

i'm sure it was a wonderful story in real life, but none of it made sense, it wasn't in any sort of order, there was no sentence variation, and no imagery.

 
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