An Island of hope

Clare and her father, Jack went out to sea. Clare's father is a fisherman for Seattle's bay coast. Her father asked her if she wanted to go with him out to sea. Clare said " I'd love to. They headed out to sea.they were in the middle of the ocean when a mysterious storm came. Rain was flooding the boat and the waves were thrashing against it. Jack said hold on Clare. After he said that the waves threw the boat up and Clare went up in the air and landed on an deserted island, well that's what it looked like.
The storm now over, Clare wonder where her father was.Clare walked around the beach and a few times called "father". No one answered. Clare decided that she needed to build a camp before dark. She walked around and found some sticks and thing to make the fire. Clare found all the things she needed before dark. She built a little hut so she'd have some where to sleep and be dry. Clare heard a noise and she realise it was her stomach telling her she was hungry. Clare was very intelligent. Clare found some berries to eat , even some edible plants, she called it salad.Clare consume both the berries and the plants and ate every bite and was full.
The next morning she felt like she was being watch by someone. Clare ate salad again. Still she wounded where her father was, and if he was okay. Clare was sitting by the fire she had made. She heard a rustle behind the trees. A little bit frightened walk over to where she was heard the noise. Clare envisioned someone running through the trees at a high speed. Clare didn't know if she was dreaming or if the figure was real. Could there be another person on the island with her ~or~ was she dreaming?
The third day Clare was there she walked the island leaving marks so she wouldn't get lost. she wanted to find out if a person really was there with her. she searched and searched and didn't find anyone before dark. so she just went back to her camp for dinner. After she ate, she heard the same noise she heard the night before. This time when she walked over to the trees and saw the figure running through the trees she said at the top of her lungs, "Who are you ?", " Come closer if so we can meet." Clare found the image moving closer to her. It moved closer and closer til the were face to face. Both looked lovingly into each others eyes.Then finally the mysterious person said " Hello. My name is Issac." Clare said with a studder still lose in his eyes. I-I am Clare."Nice to meet you". said Issac. Both of them silent now. " Well I better get to bed" Clare said breaking the silence. " Won't you come in with me?" asked Clare asked considerately. " Um.. Sure. It's along way to my camp anyway. Are you sure because you don't sound so sure. Said Clare. Totally. Issac said with a grin on his face. So Clare and Issac stayed in the same hut together and neither one of them slept.
Both of them were in love with each other. Clare asked how he got on this island. Issac replied with my Uncle's boat flung me her during this mysterious storm. Intersting! Clare said. My daddy's boat flung me here. I have been here for four days. Wow! We have alot in common. If you don't mind me asking "Do you have a mother? asked Clare. "I did. Issac said solemnly. Issac started to tell the story. My mom was driving home from her Seattle job in the city. She had to work late so it was night time when she was on her home. my father got a call and the person told him that my mother had a head on car accident. her car flip and was on its head when the ambulance got there. I have never been so sad in my entire life.
Clare looked over at Issac and saw a thin tear roll down his cheek. Clare hugged and then kissed him. The sun shone on his face.He looked amazing. Issac asked me if I wanted to go see his campsite . " Sure". said Clare. Issac took Clare back to his campsite. Somehow Clare trip over a tree branch .They weren't running,but she tripped.It's like it appeared out of no where. Issac stopped. He turned around. " Are you alright". Asked Issac. "Yea". "I'm fine". Clare said calmly. " Thanks for asking". commented Clare. "Your welcome". Issac said with a grin on his face. Issac helped her up. they were finally at campsite. It was enormous compared to hers. The first thing she notice was the five birdhouses he built. His hut or place to sleep was a lot bigger than Clare. Right smack dab in the middle was his fire pit. You could tell he had used it before. Clare was little bit jealous because he made all those things in such little time. "What do you think"? Issac asked breaking the silence." It's lovely. " How'd you make the birdhouses?" wood i founded in the woods that I look through to find shelter." Come have a seat on the logs by the fire." Command Issac." Sure". Both sitting now, Clare thought she'd ask him some questions about him and how'd he live before he got to the island. Issac? Clare said patiently. "Yeah". " How'd did you know i was here? I saw the smoke from your fire pit and your screams for your father. "Oh i see" Clare said pathetically. " Can I asked you a question?" Issac asked Clare. " What was you father name? Clare thought like she was remembering what happened to her father , Jack said Clare after the moment of silence.
" So Clare would you like me to show you around?" Where I hang out and get supplies I need. " I would be delighted said Clare as calmly as she could. Both stood up. Issac led the way to his hide outs . He left marks alot the way so he would know where to come back. Clare followed close behind him. They went through trees and bushes until the finally arrive at there destination. When Clare came behind Issac her jaw dropped in awe. There was a waterfall and bushes and bushes of berries to eat and wood stack up high into the sky. Clare had never seen anything like it before. What do you think? Issac said starting to get impatient. It-It's beautiful. Clare said. How'd you find it? I didn't find it. said Issac. You made this? Yes said Issac. The waterfall was already here and the bushes and everything else nature I just cleaned it up a little.
They both walked back to the campsite hand in hands until they reached the campsite. It was a full moon that night. Both sat on the broke off tree branch by the fire staring at the stars. Clare laid her head on his shoulder. Finally they both went into the tent together. Tomorrow they would go exploring or would they?
Clare woke up to the smell a food? She came out of the tent and saw Issac making breakfast. Issac looked at her and said "Good morning sleepy head. He chuckled. Good morning. Clare said intently. "What's the matter"? Issac asked patiently. " I don't know" . Clare said. Maybe it's just a stomach ache. Clare said with hurting pain." Are you hungry"? Issac asked trying to be considerate. " Maybe I should eat to see if that helps." Clare said guessing. She ate little bit of fish. Then she said "Uh oh" and ran over to some trees and it came back up stream. Neither one knew what was wrong so using common sense, Issac said that she should lay down in the tent. Clare said okay that might be the best thing to do.Then a few weeks later her stomach started to bulge outward. Issac notice this. Issac said with concerned, "I think you might be pregnant. "Oh my Goodness." Clare said shocked.
It was early in the morning the sun just above the horizon. both Clare and Issac heard the sound of a fisherman's boat they ran the shore and Clare saw her father and Issac saw his father . Apparently both dads saw them and pulled to the shore. Issac look at Clare and she had a small tear roll down her cheek . He hugged her and whispered it's gonna be okay.
Finally the father's were off the boat and Both hugged there children. Clare's father being carefully noticing her belly. What happened to you ? Clare's father asked her. " I think I'm pregnant ,dad. Clare said softly. " Well at least you alright. Dad? Yeah. Are you mad? No honey I'm just glad we can be together again. I thought i was never gonna see you again. Dad this Is Issac. Clare's dad and Issac shook hands with one another. Dad this is Clare, the woman of my dreams, Issac said with a grin on his face. Hello. Hi Clare said shyly. Well enough of this standing around why don't we go to the campsite and eat.
A couple of weeks after the other's arrivals came a new arrival. Issac went to show the father's his secret hide out, Clare followed. Once they were at the hide out. Clare looked like she was in great pain. Her father suggested that she sit in the waterfall pond. So she did. All three men helped her give birth to a healthy baby girl named Aqua.
Now that there newest arrival is here they will live happily ever after.
The End





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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 5:17 pm
i think the plot was good, but you may need to edit it a bit. In some places there is captial letters where there should be none and no capital letters where there should be some. Also, you are missing a lot of speech marks which makes it a little hard to understand and finally i think in the first paragraph you used the name Clare to much, mayne replace some of them with a pronoun instead. Besides the grammer errors, i think the storyline is good!
 
LilLover5-15 said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 6:23 am
pretty awesome story
 
LittleSissy95 replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 10:54 am
I have been trying to get it published as a novel but haven't had any luck. Thank you for reading it and commenting, I really appreciate it!
 
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