Love - Simplified

He got out of the car, walking over to the passenger door, he opened it, she stepped out slowly. “Whats the point of coming to this old beach? Only tourists come here.” He took her hand gently and walked down to the sand.

Wind blowing across the sand, coming down in cat-paw shapes, her dark blue dress tugged by the cold, salty draft. They walked along the edges, people swimming in the water, with every wave they would feel the pristine flow of water, they came to an empty portion of the beach. Turning towards her, wrapping his arm around her waist, “Why are you so complicated?” He moved in closer to her.

“Because I love you. I don’t care about anything but you! I’m happy anywhere, as long as I’m with you.” They kissed softly, the sky pink and dark blue, the sun almost completely below the water level, everything was soft and still.

“I love you.”





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kat_5394 said...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 10:20 am
this is superbly amazinggg
 
howdoiskill replied...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 1:26 pm
Thanks :)! This is probably one of the best pieces I've written to date
 
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