School Yard Confusion

October 11, 2010
By howdoiskill SILVER, Sarasota, Florida
howdoiskill SILVER, Sarasota, Florida
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"Alright, time for lunch," he nodded in agreement packing his things into his backpack, she was giggling with her friends.
Alone - he walked down the hallway, pushing the door open, "excuse me sorry."
Embarrassed - he continued walking, turning around, he sat on the bench.
"Want to come sit with us?"
"Sure…" they turned around walking back to their table, trailing behind realizing she was there. He knew she wouldn't notice him, he was only there because their teacher made the others play with him.
Confused - all their voices were new to him, startling him, speaking fast and cheerfully. Nearby trees shaking, leaves swirling, one hit him in the face, they giggled. Face redder than her shirt, he got up and ran…


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on Oct. 17 2010 at 7:37 am
deus-ex-machina14 BRONZE, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There are two main tragedies in life. One is not getting what one wants, and the other is getting it." -Oscar Wilde

No problem!! Maybe you could check out some of my stuff if you wanted. I'd really like your opinion!

on Oct. 16 2010 at 1:56 pm
howdoiskill SILVER, Sarasota, Florida
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Thanks ^_^! I'll deeply consider a sequal, but please try reading other pieces I submit too :)! 

on Oct. 14 2010 at 8:30 pm
JRsingersongwriter GOLD, HB, California
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Favorite Quote:
"It's one thing to put yourself in someone's shoes. It's another to walk around in them." -Me!

i agree this is an interesting beginning i'd like a "sequel" please!

on Oct. 14 2010 at 8:08 pm
deus-ex-machina14 BRONZE, Stewartsville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There are two main tragedies in life. One is not getting what one wants, and the other is getting it." -Oscar Wilde

WRITE MORE!! It sounds like an awesome beginning, just put more down!


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