School Yard Confusion

October 11, 2010
"Alright, time for lunch," he nodded in agreement packing his things into his backpack, she was giggling with her friends.
Alone - he walked down the hallway, pushing the door open, "excuse me sorry."
Embarrassed - he continued walking, turning around, he sat on the bench.
"Want to come sit with us?"
"Sure…" they turned around walking back to their table, trailing behind realizing she was there. He knew she wouldn't notice him, he was only there because their teacher made the others play with him.
Confused - all their voices were new to him, startling him, speaking fast and cheerfully. Nearby trees shaking, leaves swirling, one hit him in the face, they giggled. Face redder than her shirt, he got up and ran…

Join the Discussion

This article has 4 comments. Post your own now!

Macx14 said...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 8:08 pm
WRITE MORE!! It sounds like an awesome beginning, just put more down!
JRsingersongwriter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 8:30 pm
i agree this is an interesting beginning i'd like a "sequel" please!
howdoiskill replied...
Oct. 16, 2010 at 1:56 pm
Thanks ^_^! I'll deeply consider a sequal, but please try reading other pieces I submit too :)! 
Macx14 replied...
Oct. 17, 2010 at 7:37 am
No problem!! Maybe you could check out some of my stuff if you wanted. I'd really like your opinion!
Site Feedback