Can You Feel Me Now?

July 17, 2010
By Leona123 SILVER, Kokomo, Indiana
Leona123 SILVER, Kokomo, Indiana
6 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Chapter One

Panting filled the smelly gym as the athletes finished up their training.

Jack pulled a towel out of his locker as he headed for the shower.
"I think practice went well today, don't you think?" He asked Kane, a fellow track member.

"Yeah, I guess so." Kane replied.

Ten minutes later, the friends walked out of the locker room together. They started talking about what guys talk most about. Girls.

As they were passing the pool room, the swim team was starting to warm up. Jack glanced toward the bleachers quickly, and saw a blond haired beauty setting her towel down on the plastic bench.she had all the curves imaginable, and instantaneously, Jack fell in love.

The author's comments:
This is a short clip that I wrote because I was bored I am not very good at summaries, but I hope you enjoy it.
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This article has 2 comments.

Lindsay said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 3:22 pm

Thanks I just did it because I was bored. I will try to fix it's problems. Try reading Rays of Darkness or Light.


on Aug. 6 2010 at 7:09 am
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
32 articles 2 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

I thought it was kind of stereo type but still a good job. Waiting for more!


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