Can You Feel Me Now?

July 17, 2010
Chapter One

Panting filled the smelly gym as the athletes finished up their training.

Jack pulled a towel out of his locker as he headed for the shower.
"I think practice went well today, don't you think?" He asked Kane, a fellow track member.

"Yeah, I guess so." Kane replied.

Ten minutes later, the friends walked out of the locker room together. They started talking about what guys talk most about. Girls.

As they were passing the pool room, the swim team was starting to warm up. Jack glanced toward the bleachers quickly, and saw a blond haired beauty setting her towel down on the plastic bench.she had all the curves imaginable, and instantaneously, Jack fell in love.

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DifferentTeen said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 7:09 am
I thought it was kind of stereo type but still a good job. Waiting for more!
Lindsay replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 3:22 pm

Thanks I just did it because I was bored. I will try to fix it's problems. Try reading Rays of Darkness or Light.


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