Soulmate

June 24, 2010
By XOXOhaloXOXO GOLD, Ellsworth, Maine
XOXOhaloXOXO GOLD, Ellsworth, Maine
13 articles 1 photo 63 comments

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I'm the author of my life and, unfortunately, I'm writing in pen=]


I smiled up at him and he smiled down at me. No words were spoken but we both could read each others thoughts as if they were our own. We belong together, or that’s what his face told me. I snuggled into his side, feeling the soft movement of his chest as it rose and fell with each new breath. He began to hum our song, tapping his fingers on my arm and sending chills up my body. He whispered something so soft I barely heard it.
“Kiss me.” I looked up into his eyes once again and saw the beautiful color of the ocean in his iris. A smile broke through his lips and his perfect grin made my heart do back flips.
“OK.” I leaned forward, keeping my eyes open so I could just stare at his face, his perfect, wonderful face. He did the same and soon we were kissing, a soft tender caress, holding each other close, feeling the goose bumps spread over our skin. And then it was over and my head had found its way back to his chest. He resumed his humming and the whole universe seemed to fall together as my soul mate held me close and the stars lined up in perfect harmony in the sky to make this night one we will always remember.



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on Feb. 17 2012 at 1:07 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
32 articles 2 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

Man that was awesome. I could really feel the characters emotions; great job explaining them. I wish it was longer, but then again it felt so finished. Like there didn't need to be anymore, she was just happy you know? It felt like all she needed was him for eternity. The picture was great too, fit the piece really well. Amazing job, keep writing!

on Jul. 10 2010 at 8:40 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Thanks!  It's no problem.

on Jul. 10 2010 at 8:19 pm
XOXOhaloXOXO GOLD, Ellsworth, Maine
13 articles 1 photo 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm the author of my life and, unfortunately, I'm writing in pen=]

thx! ill b sure 2 check out sum of urs!

 


on Jul. 8 2010 at 7:32 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

I loved this, it was so sweet and beautiful, excellent word use, and very well-written.  Great job.  Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?





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