I Won't

June 22, 2010
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It was raining, pouring actually I could barely see a block ahead of me. On top of that it was dark and cold. If I ever make home its guaranteed that I will have a cold. I pulled my coat around me to try to find some kind of warmth, even though it was soaked along with everything on me.

Cutting through the darkness was a pair of headlights, I kept on walking but the lights came closer until I saw the car. I turned to see who it was hoping that it was my dad, no such luck.
“ Hey” the guy said. “Do you need a ride?”
“ No thanks”
“ It’s raining pretty hard”
“ And you’re a stranger”
“ True, but I wont hurt you”
I smiled to myself how honest.” I don’t know that but thanks for the offer”
“ I mean it”
“ so do I .” I said looking at him, I saw him smile.
“ ok, but heads up there’s a diner a few blocks away if you get there you might be able to dry off a little.”
“ yea I know, thanks anyway.”
“ no problem” he said driving away.

If that wasn’t odd then I don’t know what is.

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midnightelement said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 9:34 am
thanks you guys i'll keep writing then.
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 6:48 am

That was cute, well-described and interesting.  Nice job.  Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?

Asianflowers replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 12:36 am

Agreed :) I would like to see where it goes from here. Great start!

Also will you check out some of my work?

gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 6:40 am
Of course:)
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