I Won't

June 22, 2010
By midnightelement SILVER, Queens Village, New York
midnightelement SILVER, Queens Village, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"This is who I've been hiding and she's dying to be set free"


Your Love


It was raining, pouring actually I could barely see a block ahead of me. On top of that it was dark and cold. If I ever make home its guaranteed that I will have a cold. I pulled my coat around me to try to find some kind of warmth, even though it was soaked along with everything on me.


Cutting through the darkness was a pair of headlights, I kept on walking but the lights came closer until I saw the car. I turned to see who it was hoping that it was my dad, no such luck.
“ Hey” the guy said. “Do you need a ride?”
“ No thanks”
“ It’s raining pretty hard”
“ And you’re a stranger”
“ True, but I wont hurt you”
I smiled to myself how honest.” I don’t know that but thanks for the offer”
“ I mean it”
“ so do I .” I said looking at him, I saw him smile.
“ ok, but heads up there’s a diner a few blocks away if you get there you might be able to dry off a little.”
“ yea I know, thanks anyway.”
“ no problem” he said driving away.


If that wasn’t odd then I don’t know what is.



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on Jul. 15 2010 at 9:34 am
midnightelement SILVER, Queens Village, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"This is who I've been hiding and she's dying to be set free"

thanks you guys i'll keep writing then.

on Jul. 2 2010 at 6:40 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Of course:)

on Jul. 2 2010 at 12:36 am
Chinadoll BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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Agreed :) I would like to see where it goes from here. Great start!

Also will you check out some of my work?


on Jul. 1 2010 at 6:48 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

That was cute, well-described and interesting.  Nice job.  Keep writing!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my work?



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