Loving you is like Wanting Death Ep. 3

May 25, 2010
By iPonder GOLD, Elk Grove, California
iPonder GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Favorite Quote:
The bad things happen first,then the good things, then more bad things, then more good things: God helps us through the bad things so we can enjoy the good ones. :)


"Pfft, Like what I see?" I stood back up and circled around to greet him. " I don't actu-" I looked around at the empty aisle where The beautiful stranger was suppose to be. Gone. I turned back again only to find my face planted right smack into his chest. "What the-" I looked up and realised how much of a giant he was compared to me! All my life I was the tall one. I hit puberty earlier then my older sister, who boobs finally decided to appear last year. But now, I was the midget. It felt kinda good. I watched his mouth curve into....a smirk. That a**! I pushed him away and watched him laugh.
"Your hair reminds me of the ocean." He said after a sudden hault from his laughing.
"Yeah? And your face reminds me of-"
"Insert rude comment here." He began to laugh. Soon I found myself giggling.
"Uh, anyways. I wasnt staring at you earlier. So dont let it get to your head." I watched him bend down and select a book. He stood back up and smiled. He turned away and before he got to the next aisle a book fell from the sky and I lunged to catch it. I stared at the b;ack cover. Then looked at the title. I smiled and went to the checkout stand. As the lady placed the book in the bag she smiled.
"The girl behind the book shelf, is one of my all time favorites. Hope you enjoy it miss." She then handed me the book and I walked outside. Pfft, he is such a jerk.


The author's comments:
haha! wow its great to be back. Im done stressing over stuff. This summer is all about my writings. I feel like Ill have a lot to write about. Here you guys go part 3 xD I wanted to give u smidget and then I will go ahead and do 4 right away so that both episodes can come out. Also, sorry that episode 3 is soo short but im making it up to you with a long episode which will be up probly around the smae time three is so hope you all enjoy. Thank you for waiting.

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on Dec. 2 2011 at 4:18 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

where's ep 2? i can only find 1,3, and 4!!! D:<

jazzy13 said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 9:46 pm
is there more?? ah man tht had me at the edge of my seat! i wanna read more!!!

on Apr. 26 2011 at 10:34 pm
just-another-url GOLD, Cannes, Other
16 articles 6 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's a good thing to be strange. Normalness leads to sadness." -Philip Lester

part 2 please !! i looked but couldn't find it, did you submit it to teen ink ? 

well, it was a little short but still good :)


on Dec. 10 2010 at 8:09 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

hay i really wanna find out wht happens. i feel completely lost tho. plzz post part 2!

on Oct. 8 2010 at 4:14 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 227 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

oh, ok. thanks. lol. it says you replied in july but i just got the email today.

hrf1434 GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2010 at 6:51 pm
hrf1434 GOLD, Collierville, Tennessee
10 articles 4 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't Judge a Girl by Her Cover

where the heck is part 2

but I love the story


on Aug. 5 2010 at 2:57 pm
DiamondsIntheGrass GOLD, Martinsville, New Jersey
14 articles 1 photo 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
Worry is simply a misuse of the imagination.

i couldnt find part two!  i feel like im missing somethin biggggg. 

on Jul. 14 2010 at 9:01 pm
hannahs15 BRONZE, Madison, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you enter this world knowing you are loved and you leave this world knowing the same, then everything that happens in between can be dealt with.”
Michael Jackson

part two is called damn shifters ep2

on Jul. 14 2010 at 3:57 pm
ThatClarinetPerson SILVER, Tequesta, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 227 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life. Don't talk to me about life."
~Marvin the Paranoid Android (from the Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy series)
Statistical analysis suggests that i am probably in tune with someone
(hahahahaha! I love this cause i'm never ever ever in tune >o

i read part one, but i didnt see part two...

on Jun. 13 2010 at 8:10 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Great story!  Very creative!  I'll keep reading!

Btw, will you check out and comment on my stuff?



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