Foreign Love Part Two: Chapter 4

February 17, 2010
“Ready for training?” asked Scarlet. “Yup!” I said with a smile. Scarlet walked me over to where they were training with fists. I was excited and scare at the same time. “Here’s agent #21. He’ll be going easy on you first and then if you’re ready start getting harder. Now you have to put him down on the floor, ok?” she said. “Got it!” I said while starting on starting pose on the training mat.

Agent #21 got ready himself. Then Scarlet said go. Agent #21 rushed towards me. I moved to the side and he rushed passed me. I turned back around and kicked his legs so he fell on the floor. “Wow, great job Smith! Now let’s try that again!” Scarlet said. We started again. I punched him in the face then the gut, then kneed him in the groin and kicked his legs again so he fell on the floor. Wow it’s like I was born for being an agent! “Impressive. Well I’m guessing you’ve mastered this section now let’s continue to sword fighting” she said while walking me over to the sword fighting section.

“This is agent #56. He will be training you in swords.” I took my sword and got ready. He rushed towards me with his sword. I blocked it. I kept blocking all his hits and kept moving back and forth. Until I finally put my sword against his neck. He then surrendered. “Wow you’re really good!” he said. “Thanks!” I replied before Scarlet took me to the gun training section.

This looked like the hardest but the others’ did too but they were actually really easy. I had to shoot the targets as they came out from behind objects. As I stepped into the fake city area I began ducking and rolling and shooting every target that came out. At first it was challenging but then I got the hang of it and was actually having fun. I ended up shooting every target.

“Wow Ms. Smith you are just as impressive as our James. You are really good! We just have to set up your own helicopter, jet and car and then we can send you to James!” she said. “Wait! I get all that stuff?” I asked in utter shock. “Yes. They will al be yours we just have to make it your own!” she said. “Wow I love this place!” I said. “Glad you do.” Then she walked me over to where my new vehicles were. “Welcome to the agency, Ms. Smith!” Scarlet said with a smile.

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GirlInTheBeanie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 9:14 pm
this was hardly any training in my mind. she's supposedly going to be a professional by the time she goes to paris, and even if she's really good.. it didn't seem that realistic to me. and i dunno if you mean to do this but there's an air of implications in your writing that she's doing like a day of training before going to paris. is she? can't wait though!! =.=
KiraKira replied...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 6:55 pm
yeah, it isn't that realistic.its good, just not realistic. And you need to paint a picture more. You tell us too much. I don't feel the character. They're just names
JohnnyDeppLover123 replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 2:31 pm
Well I thought I made it clear that they were dorky...
GirlInTheBeanie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 10:34 pm
yes, but i didn't think that that meant the world and setting would be unrealistic.
contrygurl replied...
Mar. 7, 2010 at 11:36 pm
its okay depplover i think this is a great story!
JohnnyDeppLover123 replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 4:36 pm
aw thank you at least you think so...
contrygurl replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 5:05 pm
dnt wrry i think other ppl <3 it to!
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