He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

February 4, 2010
By CamilleCasse BRONZE, Kleinbug, Other
CamilleCasse BRONZE, Kleinbug, Other
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I lay, inches from his face.
He’s beautiful.
I meet his eyes, and for a second, nothing else matters. The world is at peace. The world is happy. I am happy.
I’m completely conscious of the other people in the room, yet, they could leave and I wouldn’t notice. The house could shatter and if his eyes never left mine, I wouldn’t know it.
I love you; this thought beats like a heart against my chest.
I want to separate my lips an inch and whisper these three words, but something stops me.
Rejection; I can feel this word cold in my stomach. I can feel it waiting to rip me apart.
This boy doesn’t love me. He never has.
But... in this precise moment, it no longer matters, because right now, somehow we are connected. I can feel his every breath, his every heartbeat.
Then, in that same moment, my true feelings surround me. I can lie and lie to myself forever, but inside, I know that I’m in love with this boy beside me. I know that I would choose to be with him over anyone else in this entire world. And I know that more than anything, more than sanity, more than health, more than peace, I want him to love me back.



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on Feb. 11 2010 at 3:35 pm
CamilleCasse BRONZE, Kleinbug, Other
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Thanks everyone! :)

I'll work on writing some more of this, you can also check-out Faceless in the realistic section. And don't forget to rate please :)

xox

on Feb. 11 2010 at 12:27 pm
carmie14 BRONZE, Rock Island, Illinois
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Smiles are free; so give them away(:

This is a definatly a story i can relate to. Keep writing:)

on Feb. 10 2010 at 8:11 pm
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
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Awesome. So cool and smart and sooooooooooooo relatable. Keep writing, pleaz!!!!

on Feb. 8 2010 at 5:46 pm
this is really great! you are quite a talented writer :)

..very inspiring <3

AnnaBeeX3 said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 4:52 pm
This is amazing. you really have some talent :)

on Feb. 8 2010 at 3:12 pm
CamilleCasse BRONZE, Kleinbug, Other
4 articles 0 photos 16 comments
Thanks!

I'm not really sure about continuing. These lines just sort of came to me as I was writing something completely different. We'll see about it. :)

stormie. GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2010 at 2:56 pm
stormie. GOLD, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
ѕcаттεя мε аcяоѕѕ тнε ѕкy; аи∂ juѕт lιкε а ѕтая, ι'll ѕнιиε fоя yоu.♥

wow, this is really nice! i like it! are you going to continue it??

on Feb. 8 2010 at 2:46 pm
CamilleCasse BRONZE, Kleinbug, Other
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If you like this article, please check out - Faceless - under realistic fiction.

Thanks


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