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Love is a strong word. I always thought love was only meant for people you wanted to go out with. Apparently, I was wrong. So here is my story. It began ever since I started being LDS, which means latter day saints. There was this guy named David who I thought I loved. He broke my heart, I thought he liked me and so I liked him back, I just ended up pushing to hard for him to like me as much as I liked him. After that this guy named Craig came in my life. We were best friends when we first saw each other. Harvey, my very best best friend didn’t approve of them. I always told him about how much I loved David and how much I wanted to go out with. But I Michelle Rios was stupid to think that. Now as Craig and I grew up I realized every time Craig introduced me to one of his girlfriends I felt jealous and sad, and when I introduced him to my boyfriends he showed no emotion at all. I thought this was just a strange stage for me…until his 16th Birth Day. He asked me if he could escort me to his b-day party. I was shocked! I thought that he was going to ask someone way prettier than me. 5 minutes after he asked me I had butterflies in my tummy and I blushed and said id be honored if he escorted me to his party! The day of his party David called me and asked if I would go to Craig’s party with him. I said that Craig already asked me to be his date. David was furious. So I got my outfit on and went down stairs Craig was waiting for me with a limo behind me. He said that I looked so gorgeous and kissed me on the check I blushed and said that he didn’t look to bad himself. A little while after the party started me and Craig went for a walk, but what we didn’t know was that David was following us Craig started flirting with me and I flirted back then I got cold he gave me his jacket and then kissed me. Right then and there David jumped out and started to hit Craig and of course Craig hit David back. I got in the middle of them and told them to stop. David was the first one to reply. He said that I had to pick between him and Craig. My tummy was saying pick Craig, but what my heart was saying was saying was to pick a guy named Harvey. So I said I don’t pick neither of you. I ran to Harvey and told him I loved him. He was there for me during my childhood and hopefully was going to be there with me until we both die and still have love for each other. After that he said that he loved me to. We kissed and right then and there I knew Harvey was the one for me. 2 years later we got married, and now I really do have my happy ending, my fairy tale!





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EHunt96 said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 11:31 am
YAYYY!!! HARVEY!!! <3 GREAT JOB!!! I LOVE THIS! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK :) YOU ARE A WONDEFUL WRITER!!
 
JohnnyDeppLover123 said...
Jul. 17, 2010 at 8:39 pm
hey countrygurl! we haven't talked in so long! how have u been??? oh and im in cali for the summer, but probably not anywhere near where u r, but then again i have no idea! lol =)
 
CassidyL said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 8:22 pm
Oh, Wow What can i say it's Amazing i really like it.
I have Stranger part 2 out if you'd like to read it i know you said i did but idk if you still do.
 
PoetLaureate07 said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 4:22 pm
This is so great!! Keep writing!!! I love this!!!! Your an amazing author!!!!
 
contrygurl replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 7:56 pm
thank you sooo muchh im working on something new rite now
 
Drama_Queen13 said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 2:59 pm
SO sweet! You're a great author! Keep writing please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
contrygurl replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 7:34 pm
thanks and i will keep on writing =)
 
JohnyDeppLover123 said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 1:44 pm
Omg that was just too cute!!! I loved the ending that's what made it so good!!! Awesome job keep up the great work!!! =)
 
contrygurl replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 12:50 am
thanks dont worry i will!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
JohnnyDeppLover123 replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 9:36 pm
Hahaha you should!!!
 
contrygurl replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 8:04 pm
i know huh!!?? (:)
 
JohnnyDeppLover123 replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 8:33 pm
Yup yup!!!
 
TeamJacobArchuleta said...
Feb. 13, 2010 at 1:23 pm
awww, that was so sweet!!! i loved the ending the most!!! good for harvey! lol :)
 
contrygurl replied...
Feb. 15, 2010 at 12:26 am
thank you!!!!!! whats really funny though is that the guys in the story besides harvey is that i have a crush on them!!!
 
luli said...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 12:12 pm
this is so good keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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