November 5, 2009
By luckigrl11 BRONZE, Somewhere, Ohio
luckigrl11 BRONZE, Somewhere, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's not about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning to dance in the rain."

I didn’t want to feel like this. I didn’t want this sudden sense that something was wrong all the time. Like no matter what I did, or what I said he would never go back to how it was. How he used to never let me go, kiss me all the time, and whisper to me about how I was the only one. Each day gets harder and more difficult to think everything’s okay. I know she likes him, and I know he does things to lead her on. When she wants him to sit with her he does, but he wont even sit with me, his girlfriend. The one he said he wants to spend time with. The one who he doesn’t have that much time with so he should take advantage of the few moments he does. I’m tired of feeling helpless. My family and friends don’t understand. They tell me I can do better and that he doesn’t treat me right. They don’t know him like I do though. They don’t know how amazing our first kiss was, or how he tells me everything I want to hear, or how I’ll die. A little piece of me will die when its over. I’ll try to be strong and act like I’m okay, but when we breakup, whether I do it or not I wont be okay for a long time. I hate that he’s popular, that so many girls have told me they like him. That when it’s over he’ll find someone the next day, and I’d be more depressed. I want to tell him how much he means to me but I cant. Something always gets in the way, maybe it’s the other girls. Maybe it’s the fact that I’m scared of what he’ll say. Or maybe it’s just because I’m waiting for the right moment. I’ve shed too many tears over this boy and he tells me he loves me, but he doesn’t act like it. He flirts with other girls and makes excuses. He’s getting more distracted and distant as the days go on. He spends less and less time with me. And he promised he wouldn’t hurt me, but he is. I’ve got a hole in my heart and its getting bigger. The hole is growing, growing so big that soon I wont be able to cover it up with a smile. I wont be able to hide it anymore. If only he knew that the early days were the best, and the recent ones have dragged me to heartache. Everyday I know I should get over him. I should break up with him and find someone better, but I know I cant, because I like being more than anything, his…

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dani09 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 6 2009 at 1:05 pm
dani09 BRONZE, Winchester, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart, and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words

great work, it's amazing how many people can connect to you. I'm sorry that this happened to you, but in away, you are kind of helping other people, girls especially, express what they have felt for so long. just read the comments.

on Dec. 4 2009 at 8:23 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

WOW!!! this was REALLY GOOD!!!! i can totally relate 2 it. i am so surry that u were hurt

on Dec. 4 2009 at 6:47 pm
xxxVanessaxxx SILVER, Alexander, Arkansas
9 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i CaNt Be AwAy fRoM hEr BeLlA, iT hUrTs ToO mUcH." (Jacob from the breaking dawn book)

wow i can't believe i just typed that. i hope i'll b ok l8r. i've got algebra, bye

on Dec. 4 2009 at 6:43 pm
xxxVanessaxxx SILVER, Alexander, Arkansas
9 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i CaNt Be AwAy fRoM hEr BeLlA, iT hUrTs ToO mUcH." (Jacob from the breaking dawn book)

ohmygosh. you just laid out my life's story as well. he was on the football team. he liked me, he was nice whenever his friends went away. he'd walk me to class and walk me to my bus and locker, he'd sit with me at breakfast. i felt special for once after a long depression and i was actually smiling and laughing, i was my old self again. then i found out he cheated on me with a girl that did nothing but sell her body. i cried at night when no one could hear me through four closed doors. and i was in a depression again. i've been putting on a smile since the 8th week of school and all i can say now, is that i have to make my friends and family happy and suffer alone at night. idk, i guess your story really hit me. oh, god, i'm crying.

on Dec. 3 2009 at 5:44 pm
I don't know how to say this without sounding cliche but you just described my life...and we just broke up two days ago. No one understood him like I did. No one got that he meant the world to me even when he said mean things to me and ignored me. No one understood how we got along when no one was around. No one understood that I could feel the end coming and no one could understand why I would be so hurt to lose someone that didn't treat me right. No one understood he was my world. And now he's gone. No one could ever understand. It's nice to know someone out there can. I don't know you but I understand you. I'm so sorry... This is a beautiful story. It explains things that no one could ever understand. I wish no one ever had to feel this kind of pain because it's the worst kind of pain you can feel. But I'm sure your strong enough to be okay. If you can fight hard enough to keep it together you're definitely strong enough to be okay. Love is hard. I hope everything works out okay for you. And don't forget to smile sometimes.... :)

on Dec. 3 2009 at 12:51 am
UncertainlyClear BRONZE, Haikou, Other
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It kind of had a 'my diary' kind of feel to it, but I liked it. If your need someone to help you review it I would be happy to help.

seapenguin said...
on Dec. 1 2009 at 9:25 pm
seapenguin, Healdsburg, California
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Favorite Quote:
I'm a super hero, but with no powers or motivation.

This is great. Good job!

on Dec. 1 2009 at 7:55 pm
dancing.inthe.rain GOLD, Bowling Green, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"We all fear death and question our place in the universe. The artist's job is not to subcome to dispair, but to find an antidote for the emptiness of existance." -Gertrude Stein in the movie Midnight In Paris.

OMG! i love it.. i can conect with the character so much! it is almoust like what happened to me

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