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Say Yes

October 13, 2009
By Hsif42 SILVER, Wellington, Other
Hsif42 SILVER, Wellington, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I am a leaf on the wind... Watch how I soar.


We both sat there in the midwinter sun, just me and the girl of my dreams. We sat in silence for a while, and then she spoke.

She said she wasn't sure if she could go through with it.
It was too sudden, and anyway, she was far too young to be getting married. What if there was someone else out there who truly loved her?

I told her there wasn't anyone else.

Just say yes, I said. If you don't, you'll wonder "what if?" for the rest of your life, I told her. She smiled at me.
Ok, she said.


And with that, she got up and went to tell her boyfriend she'd made up her mind.


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penguin35 said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 2:55 pm
Nice surprising ending!

on Nov. 14 2009 at 10:07 am
mellow_melon PLATINUM, Jefferson, Maryland
41 articles 14 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but my the number of moments that take our breath away."

that was good! it seemed like a happily ever after ending until you got to the last line, and it made it sort of sad. but it was good!

on Nov. 13 2009 at 5:44 pm
Dancing_Shadows SILVER, Franklin, New Hampshire
5 articles 0 photos 17 comments
This is amazing. I love how you surprised people at the end. =]

on Nov. 11 2009 at 6:55 pm
EternityBroken GOLD, Hooker, Oklahoma
17 articles 2 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is impossible to love and be wise.

awww thats sad

on Nov. 11 2009 at 1:20 pm
.peace.love.happiness. BRONZE, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
4 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live, Laugh, Love!" and "Peace, Love, and Happiness!"

I like the twist ending at the end of your article. It caught me by surprise.