To Jane, with regards...

October 13, 2009
By JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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Jane,


It’s finally time. We haven’t spoken in a while, but as you know the lack of contact doesn’t diminish my feelings for you. I took a final look at the drawing you gave me and then tore it down from my wall. The sound of tearing was not from the paper, but from my heart. Every time that I thought about you, things looked better for me. Sometimes it felt that my whole life was revolved around you. But today is different. I am no longer going to sit and here and linger onto the decadent thoughts of you. Those dreams have now faded, like paint on the walls. The only thing that I can do now is just move forward, and unfortunately that means without you in my head, and also in my life. My feelings for you will dim over time, but the tear stains that cover this page will not. The only time that you will be in my thoughts is whenever I think about the ways that you hurt me. The promises broken. Eyes diverted. Kisses left empty…

Jase



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JaseC GOLD said...
on Jun. 28 2010 at 3:44 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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 thanks!

on May. 19 2010 at 9:12 am
esmeralda BRONZE, Oak Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"you know your inlove when you can't fall asleep because reality is finally better than your dreams." dr suess "you are my glue without you, id be nothing but broken peices" miley cyrus
"when i saw yo i fell inlove, and you smiled because you knew"

ok

so i think i might LOVE this !!!

: )


JaseC GOLD said...
on May. 17 2010 at 12:58 am
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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thank you. i try :)

JaseC GOLD said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 5:05 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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grazie :) 

KatAnne SILVER said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 5:19 am
KatAnne SILVER, Meadville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
http://teenink.com/fiction/realistic_fiction/article/128063/Sweet-Sixteen/
http://teenink.com/fiction/romance/article/129766/It-Just-Happened/
http://teenink.com/fiction/romance/article/162872/Forbidden-Love-and-Great-Adventure-Part-One

Quite true.

JaseC GOLD said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 10:38 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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heartbreak is beautiful 

JaseC GOLD said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 10:37 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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i do what I can. 

paiiige BRONZE said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 5:24 pm
paiiige BRONZE, Naples, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
color my life with the chaos of trouble

i absolutely love this! so many people write about these feelings without putting much thought to how they're executed but you wrote them in a different and new way.. it's fun to read and i know it's really relatable(: 

JaseC GOLD said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 5:09 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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aww thank you :) 

phebbs said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 8:21 pm
i honestly feel like you just read everything i want to say to my ex boyfriend, and wrote it out. this is so powerful and amazing

JaseC GOLD said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 10:29 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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thank you thank you :)

JaseC GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 12:48 am
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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things happen right?

JaseC GOLD said...
on Feb. 21 2010 at 12:48 am
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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thank you thank you

Kass_ BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 10:44 pm
Kass_ BRONZE, Uvalde, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, and stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think."-A.A. Milne

You should write more.

You're great

jatz318 SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 7:51 pm
jatz318 SILVER, East Brunswick, New Jersey
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Considering that this topic is overly written about, you did a clever job when you made your letter succinct. It is beautifully written though. Something anybody could relate to.

on Nov. 20 2009 at 9:58 pm
professionalreader11 BRONZE, Sacramento, California
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Favorite Quote:
Don't pretend to love that which you don't feel, for love is not our to command.

wow. thats all i can think of to say. wow. your writing is so incredible. "decadent thoughts" wow. you're fantastic =]

on Nov. 20 2009 at 6:39 pm
FrySnickerdoodle, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is weakness leaving the body"
"He who angers you, conquers you"

This is really great, and I can somewhat relate.

I'm sorry you had to go through this

Ali.B GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 3:41 pm
Ali.B GOLD, Lexington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I write whatever flows from my fingers- AJY

I will read more by you. I relate so well. Good job!

JaseC GOLD said...
on Nov. 20 2009 at 1:48 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 44 comments
thank you mate, and it's alright, i'll be ok :)

on Nov. 19 2009 at 9:43 pm
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“We accept the love we think we deserve.”
― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

the word are like a melody, sweetly carrying you across the page. and im really sorry if this whole thng is true...


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