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To Jane, with regards...

October 13, 2009
By JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Jane,


It’s finally time. We haven’t spoken in a while, but as you know the lack of contact doesn’t diminish my feelings for you. I took a final look at the drawing you gave me and then tore it down from my wall. The sound of tearing was not from the paper, but from my heart. Every time that I thought about you, things looked better for me. Sometimes it felt that my whole life was revolved around you. But today is different. I am no longer going to sit and here and linger onto the decadent thoughts of you. Those dreams have now faded, like paint on the walls. The only thing that I can do now is just move forward, and unfortunately that means without you in my head, and also in my life. My feelings for you will dim over time, but the tear stains that cover this page will not. The only time that you will be in my thoughts is whenever I think about the ways that you hurt me. The promises broken. Eyes diverted. Kisses left empty…

Jase



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JaseC GOLD said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 4:17 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
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thank you love :)

Kass_ BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 9:36 pm
Kass_ BRONZE, Uvalde, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, and stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think."-A.A. Milne

Absolutely amazing:)

JaseC GOLD said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 4:19 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 44 comments
I'm glad that you liked it; even if the subject matter is rather cliched.

mDawg said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 12:59 pm
I loved this. Heartbreaking, in a sad/good way. I love how yous wrote it, amazing job.

KatAnne SILVER said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 8:20 pm
KatAnne SILVER, Meadville, Pennsylvania
8 articles 1 photo 165 comments

Favorite Quote:
http://teenink.com/fiction/realistic_fiction/article/128063/Sweet-Sixteen/
http://teenink.com/fiction/romance/article/129766/It-Just-Happened/
http://teenink.com/fiction/romance/article/162872/Forbidden-Love-and-Great-Adventure-Part-One

This was very beautiful despite it's over all theme of heart break.

JaseC GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 6:57 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 44 comments
This a real letter I wrote, but she never received. Jase is my real name, but I use Jane after my favorite song, and thank you by the way

AmandaL BRONZE said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 1:32 am
AmandaL BRONZE, Newton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"When you're young, it's okay to be easily ignored." -Jason Mraz

Hate to pry, but is this a real letter? If so, how uncanny the names are... Jane and Jase seem as though they would fit together so nicely, but the obvious turn of events described in the letter prove otherwise.

Well written, a bit of an over-done topic, but still, all things considered, a good piece. I like your word choice.

windblossom said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 12:32 am
windblossom, Hyderabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The caterpillar does all the hard work, but the butterfly gets all the publicity"

sure!! :)!

JaseC GOLD said...
on Nov. 13 2009 at 4:16 pm
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 44 comments
thank you very much, i have a lot more things posted so feel free to check them out.

windblossom said...
on Nov. 13 2009 at 6:15 am
windblossom, Hyderabad, Other
0 articles 19 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The caterpillar does all the hard work, but the butterfly gets all the publicity"

well written! could relate to it really easily! looking forward to read more from you! :)

JaseC GOLD said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 12:15 am
JaseC GOLD, Granbury, Texas
19 articles 0 photos 44 comments
thank you very much.

on Nov. 11 2009 at 6:35 pm
Dancing_Shadows SILVER, Franklin, New Hampshire
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Aww =[ This is short but sweet and heartfelt. Very well written.