Oblivious

September 14, 2009
By Beth Spink BRONZE, Bourne, Other
Beth Spink BRONZE, Bourne, Other
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Falling apart, I sit here, just trying to concentrate on algebra. Trying not to love you. 
And you're just sitting there, oblivious, laughing with your friend that sits at the desk in front of us. I laugh too, it's absurd.
You say my name, it sounds so much better in your voice. I blush and answer sarcasticly. 
Mr Webb yells at us. 
"Be quiet. Get on with your work."
I try. But when you're just sat there. Oblivous. I feel like kissing you.
Off on a tangent.
You kiss me back and say that you love me an do I want to go our sometime. 
But I don't. You don't.
You just sit there. Oblivious. Singing a song under your breath. Absentmindedly.
I know that tune. Quietly I sing along.
Under my breath. Absentmindedly.
"You and I"
 


The author's comments:
Basically this is a (very) short story about me and my crush. Who I do sit next to in maths and my maths teacher is called Mr Webb.
Oh and by the way, the song at the end is 21 guns by green day. I love that song!

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on May. 7 2010 at 7:46 pm
Moonlight14 PLATINUM, Mechanic Falls, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
'To love is to destroy' - The Mortal instruments
If you can't see the bright side of life, polish the dull side.
What the French, Toast?!

I've personally never been in luv but it sounds to me tht sum day u 2 will be 2gether. Good Luck!!

on Nov. 3 2009 at 10:42 am
BriarRose PLATINUM, Seneca, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I don't need a rose. I want a daisy you picked for my hair. I don't want some fancy box of chocolate. I want a pink frosting cookie you made just for me. Lets skip the upscale restaraunt and have a picnic in the park.

this is such a real piece, and like some of the other commenters, i'm going through the same thing

on Oct. 26 2009 at 6:24 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

I LOVE THIS!!!! I have experienced this before. I can completely relate! Keep writing!!!! :)

on Oct. 26 2009 at 5:09 pm
---Sixx--- PLATINUM, /, Other
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Favorite Quote:
\"To see what a man is like, take a look at how he treats his inferiors, not his equals.\"

This is brilliant. I love it. I'm going through the exact same thing. Perfect.

bobally BRONZE said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 10:04 pm
bobally BRONZE, Manchester, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"damned if you do, bored if you don't"

love this. something i can definitely connect to. awesome writing!


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