Simply Fate

August 17, 2009
Letters came everyday after Scottie left, but I never read them. My feelings for him left my heart the day he told me that she was pregnant. His father forced him to leave, and with the words ‘Fate I still love you, and I always will,’ he left.

It was a cold day in December, a year after Scottie left. Enough time had passed for my love for him to change into sheer contempt.

“Fate!” Jon yelled from across the hall. “Scottie is coming back.”

I froze. Those words were the ones I had once wished to hear, but now I knew that I would never be able to face him again.

“What?” I asked, in complete shock.

“Genevieve gave the baby up for adoption, and Scottie convinced Dad to let him come home.”

At that moment, I knew that I had to leave. There was no way I could stay, and go to school with the one guy I had spent the past year trying to forget.

“Thanks for the warning, Jon.”

“What are you going to do?” he asked.

“Leave, I suppose. You know I won’t be able to see him again.”

“You can’t just leave. He’ll just keeping looking for you, Fate.”
“Why would he want to find me?” I asked, hopelessly.

“Because, Fate, I still love you, and nothing can change that.”

“Scottie..” I whispered. Nothing had changed about him. His eyes, the first thing I noticed, were filled with complete sorrow and remorse. All the emotions, which I had repressed for the past year, overtook me, and all I could remember was how much I missed him, how much I needed him.

“I made a mistake, but please let me be with the one girl whom I never stopped thinking about since the day I left home. Everyday I thought of you; the memories of us were the reasons I was able to live. You were the sole reason I was able to make it through all the horrible days of Genevieve’s pregnancy. She even began to realize that I loved you. Fate, she gave the child up for adoption because she wanted me to be with you. Fate, please don’t leave me, I promise never to let you down.”

And with those words, my tears began to fall.





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msoccerm345 said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 1:26 pm
i love this story!! i agree it could be longer but i think that the way it is is really good because it lets people interpret it their own way. I dont know if you were trying but the metaphor you made with the girls name (Fate) was absolutly amazing and added a lot to the story.
 
FutureNovelist said...
Nov. 21, 2010 at 10:59 pm

i really liked it :)

continue writing :P

 
cupcakegirl10 said...
Nov. 21, 2010 at 12:24 pm

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! <3

i loveeee thisss! :D

please write more?? :) im a sucker for love stories! :P

 
cheytylemae. said...
Jul. 15, 2010 at 12:45 pm
this was sweet, i love it.
 
feartheuntypical said...
May 8, 2010 at 12:07 am
Wow, that is a really cool story.
 
choirchic said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 10:26 pm
please write more. i loved it but was left hanging
 
Anjo! said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 1:37 am
Wow, awesome. too short. I WANT MORE!
 
simply_fate replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 2:06 am
aww thanks for the encouragement :)
 
Anjo! replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 10:49 pm
seriously. can you write more? I seriously want to know what happens next. i feel left hangin!
 
bayleegurl replied...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 9:53 am
is it a true story??
 
simply_fate replied...
Jan. 24, 2010 at 1:20 pm
hahaha nope
 
ToomuchtoAsk said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 10:58 am
should be longer........it's really good.. lots of emotion
 
simply_fate replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 2:07 am
thanks!! :)
 
JacintaT said...
Aug. 27, 2009 at 12:20 pm
I'd love to see this in a longer version, like to read more into this story.
 
simply_fate replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 2:07 am
yah! it's all I've written for this story.. I might try to come up with more :)
 
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