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my angels whisper

I fell instantly under her captivating beauty,gazing up to meet her eyes i gasped at her radiance.She smiled at me sweetly,seeing the endless stream of tears flow over my skin she took my hand. " darling,all is forgiven..." she whispered softly. She lifted me up gracefully

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TigerLynn said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 6:53 pm
I really like this. I can really feel what is happening and you are good at writing romance! But please extend the pleasure by making it longer.
tgir85 replied...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 4:04 pm
ok i will!!! ^^ thanks for ur comment!!
tgir85 replied...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 4:07 pm
also i had to get off the computer at that moment otherwise i woulve made it longer...
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