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my angels whisper

I fell instantly under her captivating beauty,gazing up to meet her eyes i gasped at her radiance.She smiled at me sweetly,seeing the endless stream of tears flow over my skin she took my hand. "...my darling,all is forgiven..." she whispered softly. She lifted me up gracefully



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TigerLynn said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 6:53 pm:
I really like this. I can really feel what is happening and you are good at writing romance! But please extend the pleasure by making it longer.
 
tgir85 replied...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 4:04 pm :
ok i will!!! ^^ thanks for ur comment!!
 
tgir85 replied...
Oct. 21, 2009 at 4:07 pm :
also i had to get off the computer at that moment otherwise i woulve made it longer...
 
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