my angels whisper

July 12, 2009
By tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."


I fell instantly under her captivating beauty,gazing up to meet her eyes i gasped at her radiance.She smiled at me sweetly,seeing the endless stream of tears flow over my skin she took my hand. "...my darling,all is forgiven..." she whispered softly. She lifted me up gracefully

The author's comments:
just came up with this while listening to evanescence..

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tgir85 GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 4:07 pm
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."

also i had to get off the computer at that moment otherwise i woulve made it longer...

tgir85 GOLD said...
on Oct. 21 2009 at 4:04 pm
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."

ok i will!!! ^^ thanks for ur comment!!

TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 13 2009 at 6:53 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."
--Byron

I really like this. I can really feel what is happening and you are good at writing romance! But please extend the pleasure by making it longer.


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