Around and Around and Around

October 11, 2017
By HidingAnnabella SILVER, Milltown , Wisconsin
HidingAnnabella SILVER, Milltown , Wisconsin
6 articles 10 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I can choose my friends and I can choose my family.~boyinaband

Around and around and around till the world is just a blur and you fall onto your back in the cold,white forest blanket. As you look up at the bare trees above, the cold creeps into you jacket and turns your face to a bright red. The beautiful cold starts to turn you numb as the light flakes kiss your body. You can't stop staring at the beautiful frozen art work falling to the grown even as you feel your body get colder and weaker. You are at wonder by the sky above that you can't even feel you arms and legs go numb and your eyes slip shut.

The author's comments:

I love the idea of snowing being beautiful and dangerous at the same time.

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on Jan. 3 at 2:41 pm
Elizabeth2001 BRONZE, Durand, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Your hardest times often lead to the greatest moments of your life. Keep going. Tough situations build strong people in the end.”

I really liked this and think you could add more to it.

on Jan. 2 at 2:35 pm
max.stump SILVER, Statesboro, Georgia
8 articles 1 photo 3 comments
I enjoyed this, and I really like how you make something so simple seem so complicated. However, I feel like you definitely could've done more with it.


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