Recovery: Part 1

May 22, 2012
By writer_girl SILVER, Stuart, Virginia
writer_girl SILVER, Stuart, Virginia
7 articles 0 photos 9 comments

I don't remember what happened to me. I was told it was raining, and I was riding home with a couple of buddies. I don't know who they were. The car hit a patch of water and hydroplaned out of control. They said when the car crashed, it split into two pieces. I was told that it knocked me out cold, but what happened the next morning is the beginning of my story.

It was black. Where was I? I could hear voices, but I didn't know who they belonged to. My eyelids started to open, and I saw three blurs. As my vision became clearer, I could tell what they looked like, but who were they? The woman came to me and buried her head in my chest, crying her eyes out. She started talking to me.

"Oh, Joshua, thank God you came to!"

"Uh... who are you?"

"Joshua! It's me, your mother; and this is your father!"

"I'm sorry, but I believe you are mistaken."

"Oh, George, what are we going to do? He doesn't know us!"

"Come on Susan. Let's let him rest."

When they left the room, I heard more crying, but the third person stayed. The figure came and stood over my bed, giving me a nauseating feeling.

"I am Doctor Lee. I will be the doctor over your recovery. Everyday you will see a physical therapist. Once a week, you will see a psychologist. Now, breakfast will be served in thirty minutes."

The doctor left. A mirror was on the opposite wall from me. I looked at myself. Who was this person I saw? I became furious as I stared into the mirror. I began to scream.

"Who am I?!"

All three of the people came running back into my room, but a nurse came in and escorted the wife back out. The doctor came to my bedside once again.

"You are on a verge of self discovery."

I didn't know what lied ahead, but I was determined to find out who I was, where I was from, and what lied ahead in the future.

The story continues later in Recovery: Part 2.


The author's comments:
This is a story about self discovery. A teenager, who doesn't know who he is, creates a new personality after learning how he was in the past to become a better person.

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on Jun. 23 2012 at 4:31 pm
KenyaLove41 GOLD, Dallas, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Day, n. A period of twenty-four hours, mostly misspent." ~Ambrose Bierce
"Nothing is Impossible, the word itself says 'I'm Possible!'" ~ Audrey Hepburn
"Good writing is only bad writing revised"~ Unknown

I liked the idea of the story and can't wait to read more. Personally when i began to read the storyi thought it was a girl soo if you clear that up a bit and also stronger word choice would make the story bettter.

on May. 31 2012 at 4:11 pm
WSwilliams GOLD, Toronto, Ontario, Other
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Favorite Quote:
If you keep writing, you will pick up structure. You will pick up form

- Richard Matheson

Hello! I promised I would look at "Recovery" and I'll hope you read "Creation" please. This story is very promising and has interested me. I felt like you were telling more than showing, but its my opinion.  I would like to know a bit more about him. I'll get to your sequel next, but all in all, your story is great. :)

on May. 29 2012 at 12:23 pm
Hibiscus SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"None of us can do great things. But we can do small things with great love." - Mother Teresa

Nice! It pulled me in and was very intriguing. Personally, I found the word choice a little weak. You could imporve on sentences like "I began to scream" and add some adverbs and adjectives. Otherwise, great job! Can''t wait to read part 2! 


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