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(Music: Unstoppable, Rascal Flatts)
(Dark, fade in and out with music [referred to as M])

M "So, so you made alot of mistakes"

(Fade in: EXT: Dirt road, still, serene, tall grass blowing in wind)

M "Walked down the road a little sideways, cracked a brick when you hit the wall

(Fade out)

(Fade in: Dusty cowboy boots standing on road)

M "Yeah, got a pocketful of regrets, pull you down faster than a sunset"

(fade out)

M "It happens to us all"

(fade in, BV of girl, EVA, dressed in simple shirt, ripped jeans, boots, shoulder-legnth strait black hair)

(fade)

M "When the cold, hard rain just wont quit"
(Thunder rumbles)

M "And you can't find your way out of it"

(fade in, EVA's face, hair blowing in front of green eyes)

(pause on image)

(EVA runs out of shot)

(FV of road)
M "You find your faith has been lost and shaken
(EVA runs down road, SLOW MOTION, as she proceeds, tears run down her face. She is desperate)

M"You take back what's been taken. Get on your knees and dig down deep"

(EVA falls to knees, crying)
(It begins to rain, her clothes sag with water, her hair hangs in strings)

(CLOSE UP, torso and face)
(EVA's face is distorted with anxiety, water runs down her face to the point where tears and rain cannot be distinguisted)

M"YOu can do what you think is impossible"

(EVA looks up at sky, deperate)

M"Keep on believing, dont give in, it'll come and make you whole again"

(SHE lets her arms drop to her sides)




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