May 29, 2011
By Abbyacter BRONZE, Champaign, Illinois
Abbyacter BRONZE, Champaign, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:

Molly : Katie, I want some more silly bands!
Katie : I don't think your mom would like it if your babysitter went out and bought you even more silly bands!
Molly : I want to be able to fill both my arms and legs.
Katie : That would cut off your limbs.
Katie : how would that be cool at all?
Molly : Now boys would like me!
Katie : No I think that would make them not even look at you.
( a cell phone rings )
Katie : Hello?
Billy : Where are you?
Katie : Why dose it mater?
Billy : I'm am coming to get you!
Molly : Is every thing ok Katie?
Katie : Yes every thing is ok , go up to bed and ill tuck you in soon ok.
Molly : Ok.
Billy : Why where you not at home this morning?
Katie : Because I left you Billy!
Billy : There is no way in hell that you would ever leave me!
Katie : Well it just happened!
( Katie hangs up her cell phone. She runs up stairs to tuck Molly in. there is a knock on the front door. )
Molly : Who do you think it is?
Katie : I don't know Molly. I'll be right back.
Stay here!
Molly : Ok
( Katie goes down the stairs slowly. She opens the door )
Katie : How did you find me?
Billy : Because we where meant for each other Katie!
Katie : No Billy never again!
Billy : Please I love you!
Katie : No!
Billy : But ( Katie cuts him off)
Katie : NO! (Katie slams the door in his face. Katie runs to the phone and calls the cops )
The police officer : How may I help you?
Katie : My ex boyfriend is out side the house I baby sit at.
The police officer : Are there any kids in the house?
Katie : There is only one and she is up stairs.
The police officer : Make sure you both are up stairs away from windows.
Katie : Ok are you all going to be here soon?
The police officer : Yes we will stay calm!
Katie : Ok thank you!
( Katie runs up stairs to get Molly )
Molly : What’s going on Katie?
Katie : Everything is going to be all right but right now we need to hind ok!
Molly : Ok.
( Katie pulls Molly into her closet )
Katie : ( in hushed tone ) Be quite!
Molly : ( just shakes her head )
Billy : I'm going to find you Katie!
( Billy sees flashing lights outside the window )
Billy : Oh crap!
The police officer : Come out with your hands up!
( Billy walks into Molly's room and hears Molly sneeze )
Billy : I'm going to find you!
( Billy swings open the closet and grabs Molly and puts a gun to her head )
Billy : I've got a hostage! You come in and I kill her!
The police officer : Ok we will not come in as long as you don't hurt anyone!
( Katie has a chance to get outside the bad room and lock herself in the hall bathroom )
Katie : Hello?
Molly's mom : Katie , is there something wrong?
Katie : Yes, my ex boyfriend found me at your house broke in and has a gun to Molly's head!
Molly's mom : Are the police there?
Katie : Yes , please come home now!
Molly's mom : Ok I'm on my way.
Katie : Thank you!
( The police officers break in the front door and run up the stairs)
Billy : I told you not to came in here!( Billy shots the gun and Molly falls to the ground)
Katie : No!
The police officers : Your going to jail ! Call a paramedic!
Molly's mom : NO!
( The paramedics put Molly on a gurney and take her to
the hospital )
Molly's mom : I'll meat you at the hospital!
Katie : I'm so sorry , it's all my fault, I opened the door ( Molly's mom cuts her off )
Molly's mom : No it's not and it's ok.
( Molly's mom get's into her car and drives to the hospital )
The Doctor at the hospital : I'm so sorry but Molly's dead Mrs. English.
Mrs. English : ( she starts to cry. Katie arrives at the hospital and starts to cry after she sees Mrs. English crying )

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on Jun. 28 2011 at 11:44 am
Odessa_Sterling00 DIAMOND, No, Missouri
87 articles 108 photos 968 comments

Favorite Quote:
All gave some, some gave all. -War Veterans headstone.

Well, this story didn't show very much of any emotion, besides the crying at the end.  Why would she just leave the door unlocked and why would the boyfriend have a gun and why would she run away from the child she was supposed to be taking care of when it's got a gun pointed at it's head and why would she call someone during all this?  This whole story didn't add up very much and I'm sorry to say, I didn't like it at all.


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