Unreaveled heart

May 31, 2011
By , lowell, MA
Have you ever locked away your heart by being afraid of getting hurt again? Life is about taking chances and if your not willing to jump or take a swing at life than your hopeless. Julie was 12 when she had her first crush, but sadly when she finally took a step forward and confess to him, he rejected her and she thought her whole life had ended! if i was Julie i would have moved on, but tell me? would you have or are you to afraid what lays again in life

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can_you_keep_a_secret said...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 1:12 pm

I liked your meaning. You had a goal lesson in mind, but it wasn't entirely "deep" enough. You know, like heart- wrenching. I loved the lesson you were trying to tech though. Take risks, "jump or take a swing at life." Is really interesting(:
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