Unreaveled heart

May 31, 2011
By Anonymous

Have you ever locked away your heart by being afraid of getting hurt again? Life is about taking chances and if your not willing to jump or take a swing at life than your hopeless. Julie was 12 when she had her first crush, but sadly when she finally took a step forward and confess to him, he rejected her and she thought her whole life had ended! if i was Julie i would have moved on, but tell me? would you have or are you to afraid what lays again in life



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on Jun. 15 2011 at 1:12 pm
tayleeeeeeeer SILVER, Laplata, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Sometimes good things fall apart, so better things can fall together.

I liked your meaning. You had a goal lesson in mind, but it wasn't entirely "deep" enough. You know, like heart- wrenching. I loved the lesson you were trying to tech though. Take risks, "jump or take a swing at life." Is really interesting(:
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