i no longer beleive in miracles

February 26, 2011
By Anonymous

i look out the window, rain falls, and i wish it would just wash me away. my mom's headlights fade away into the night, she is not coming back, not this time, and even though i know this, every part of me wishes for her to turn around and come back to us, come back to me. what did i do to make her want to leave me, was it something i did, or was it just me being here? i would bring her back if i could, but i can't. this is the reel world, not a fantasy, and miracles don't happen.



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on Mar. 31 2011 at 4:30 pm
marzapan PLATINUM, Westchester, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"do not lead me unto temptation, i can find the way my self" rita brown
"die fish Hitler die" jake: homestuck
"My only friend growing up was a yak." -Russia (Hetalia)
"Pants are your first priority." -My friend

this is butifull, good job. keep on writing. :)

Jayanna SILVER said...
on Mar. 8 2011 at 10:44 am
Jayanna SILVER, Quebec, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Well behaved women rarely make history,

Everything happens for a reason

Nice. You did a pretty good job, and you can try adding more lines. I especially liked the last sentenced.  Would you mind reading some of my stuff too? It's:  Through the devil's eyes.

thanks, and keep it up, you've got great potential :)


on Mar. 6 2011 at 1:46 pm
inksplatteredfingerz SILVER, Union, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Where I'm from, we believe all sorts of things that aren't true--we call it history."--the Wizard; Wicked

its a really powerful piece, especially considering that its 1paragraph. awesome job. but i think breakin up some of your sentences would be a good idea, especially the 2nd sentence. 1sentence paragraphs also make more of an impact--just a sugestion.

great piece! keep writing=). and look up some of my pieces while your at it. thx=)



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