Who Am I?

November 11, 2010
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Who am I?

Why do I feel like this?

The voice is faint. Almost a whisper.
The room is white. And he can't tell how big it is, or how far it goes.
He runs, and stops.
Afraid to hit a wall.
Afraid to hit nothing.

Why do you feel like this?

The voice is louder now. Is it in his head?
He looks around. Hoping to find it.
The panic sets in. His heart pounding.
He runs his fingers through his hair.
He runs.

Why do we feel like this?!

The voice is screaming now.
Tears are in the boys eyes now.
He's nothing but a boy.
A lost and scared animal.
He runs.
Running as fast as he can. He doesn't care if he hits a wall, now.
If he hits nothing.

Why doI feel like this?

The voice is a whisper again.
He crumbles to the floor.
He hits nothing.

...Why do I feel like this?

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x-Miyako-x said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 3:58 pm
Jebus womans... i has luh shivers D: have i ever told you how absolutely horrible most of the stuff you write is, but it's absolutely amazing?!!! I really hope you get published one day, even if it's not with TeenInk
JackAndSally said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 3:44 pm
stunning...absolutely stunnning.
MunroeFreakkk said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 3:42 pm
WOW! Absolutely amazing! ive read it six times!! :D :D
LoveMeDead221 said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 3:38 pm
Wow!! This is amazing!!! Absolutely beautiful!! It's full of different emotions, and I understand every one of them!! Gorgeous!
JenfulloftheJustice said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 7:41 pm
Amazing. Full of fealing, putting words into the mouths of those who don;t know how to explain their thoughts, their feelings. Awesome.
pumpkinnqueenn said...
Nov. 14, 2010 at 7:20 pm
This is an amazing peice. So short and yet abosolutly brimming with emotion. Simply amazing.
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