A Contest to Remember

2010-06-04
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“He’s gonna blow,” says Billy. That was the last thing said in this gruesome, stomach bloating contest. Jim went into this with no worries. He was heavy set and was known to take down mountains of food. He was eating so many hot dogs at the contest that you could see his stomach expanding rapidly.





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5star_writter_mone said...
Jul. 12, 2010 at 10:13 am
it was good but its really short
 
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 8:12 pm

Very interesting, great use of words, and understandable--but where's the rest?

And btw, will you check out and comment on my work?

 
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