death's song

May 1, 2010
everyone around me was scared.
I didn't know why but they where.
everyone screaming and praying for a chance to live. each person with a cry gave up all hope for living. I now wish I could see my family again. tell them how much I love them. then in a flash of light it was dark I couldn't see anyone around me and I couldn't hear any screaming. My heart had stopped beating and I couldn't catch my breath. I guessed that it was all over. I could tast death at the tip of my tung and then I heard a beautiful song. I couldn't understand the words. then all I could see was a big bright light. As I got up I heard the same melody but I could understand the words and it was a greating. Now I know I was dead. But just as I started walking to the light I heard a voiced I thought I would never hear. then I opened my eyes I saw the person I had hoped I was hearing. And it was, my mom, and as I analized the room I new it was the hospital. I kept to my self what I saw that day and from then on I always humed that song and keeped it in my heart forever.


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Aug. 24, 2010 at 5:44 pm

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May 19, 2010 at 1:23 pm
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