Life After the Ball

October 27, 2010
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While Cinderella was running down the steps to get to her carriage, one of her shoes fell off and she tripped and fell down the stairs. After she fell down the steps, the prince came out and immediately took her to the hospital. Cinderella was placed in a room and the doctor came to find out what was wrong, then left. It had just struck twelve o'clock and she transformed back into her peasant clothes. When the doctor came back in to tell her that nothing was wrong, he didnt recognize her. He mistaked her for another patient, and thought that he had just walked into the wrong room. He called the nurses in to have the patient wheeled into the operating room to have brain surgery. She then told the doctor that he told her she was fine and she was going to be released from the hospital. The nurses warned the doctor that this patient was tricky and was trying to convince other doctors earlier that she did not need surgey. She then entered the operating room......

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Vanendra said...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 3:45 pm
i never imagined cinderella tripping,nice imagination ^-^
Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 31, 2010 at 3:35 am
Change mistaked to thought she was. It's easier to read! Great twist. I like it. Well done. You should continue this!
CaraBlane replied...
Nov. 1, 2010 at 1:54 pm

hahaha!!! That is what you get for tripping down the stairs in a fancy gown!!!! (still laughing)=)


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