Shortlived life

October 13, 2008
By Alyssa Danks, Kaleva, MI

My head pounded. It had been three hours in surgury and I had just awoke. The blow in the head was now stapled shut. My cousin lifted my head and took the blood covered pillow out from underneath me and replaced it with a fresh one. Every on was silant untill the nurse came in dragging the doctor not far behind. "Hello abigale." The doctor said glumly. "I am afraid that we have some horrible news." Coming from a doctor that didnt sound good. "Bum Bum Bummmmmmmmmmmmmm" The heart meater was starting to drop quickly. "Abigale, much to our dissmay. This is your last 5 minutes. the blow you took to the head has fractured your internal organs and some parts of the skull. We tryed to replace and fix them during the surgury," Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.The heart moniter signaled my Death..

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alirox said...
on Oct. 29 2008 at 1:34 am
This is amazingly mine!!!!


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